Dream of the Red Chamber: I Went to the Capital to Beat Up Baoyu

When reading this novel, which is a re-creation of the classic plot of "A Dream of Red Mansions", I have to admit that the author did a pretty good job in telling the early story. The writing is smooth and the plot is fascinating. Especially for those ill-fated characters in the original work, the author has given new life and story lines. This innovative spirit is worthy of appreciation. However, the evaluation and rewriting of Jia Baoyu, the core character, seems a bit unfair and fails to fully capture his complex character and destiny. In addition, the frequent appearance of supernatural forces in the novel adds a touch of mystery to the story, but it also weakens the rigor of the work to a certain extent. If it is positioned as a magical realism novel, these elements are naturally plus points, but if measured by the standards of traditional historical novels, it seems a bit excessive. Despite this, at least until Chapter 138, this book is still a rare masterpiece in this software. Its unique perspective and novel ideas are refreshing. Unfortunately, starting from Chapter 138, the quality of the story dropped significantly. The plot of the protagonist entering the army is handled quite messily, and the development of the plot makes it difficult to continue to invest. This change not only broke the previous narrative rhythm, but also affected the credibility of the entire story. It is hoped that the author will be less involved in military matters, reduce the use of supernatural elements, and pay more attention to the realistic basis of the story in subsequent creations, so as to make the work more complete and convincing. Overall, despite some shortcomings, this second-generation novel still has certain reading value. The author's writing style still needs to be refined, and he hopes to be able to regain his original intention in subsequent chapters and conduct a more objective and in-depth discussion of Jia Baoyu's image. I hope the author can take the readers' opinions into account and make significant improvements to the content after Chapter 138, so that this work can truly shine. (Note: When I was young in junior high school, I opened "Dream of Red Mansions" for the first time, and the twists and turns of the plot once made me intoxicated. Time flies, although the intricate story details have long been blurred in my memory, but the lifelike creation of the characters in the book still impresses me. Each character is like a real life coming out of the pages of the book, and their emotions, conflicts and destiny are intertwined into vivid pictures, as if they can talk to us through time and space. I wholeheartedly recommend this re-created book. It not only revived my fond memories of "Dream of Red Mansions", but also ignited my desire to explore the masterpiece of Master Cao Xueqin in depth again. I believe that everyone who reads this book will be attracted by its unique charm and eager to taste the mellowness of the original work. Finally, I have to praise the greatness of "Dream of Red Mansions" again. It is not only a treasure of Chinese literature, but also a shining pearl in the world's cultural treasure house. Its profound characterization, delicate emotional depiction, and broad social background are all astonishing. Whether you are a literature lover or a first-time reader, reading "Dream of Red Mansions" is a baptism of the soul and an unforgettable journey)

Wonderful! The Red Mansion fanfic is very good. That's what it's like to travel through the crowd. After the safety issue is solved, no one will get used to it, no one will be troubled, and no one will be offended! Who is good to me and who is bad to me have clear grudges. It is in line with the modern thinking of right and wrong. Especially the handling of Jia Zhen and his son, no planning is needed, it is handled smoothly and smoothly. Originally, compared to ancient times, modern people would neither deliberately plan for a beautiful woman nor reject them.

Five stars, thank you to the author, the characters are all very good, just don't mess with the system. I personally like this book very much, and I have no intention of affecting the author's creation. [Salute][Salute][Salute]

I have read many books on the theme of Red Mansions. The characters, language and actions of this book are very consistent with the original work. I feel that the author has read the original work of Red Mansions intensively many times and has a deep understanding of the characters. He can restore daily events well. The author has strong writing skills. It is a rare masterpiece of Red Mansions. Hope to keep up the good work and provide more updates! [Adoration]

The first half of the book is well written. The protagonist is relatively shrewd in his appearance. He is cautious about advances and retreats, and he also pays attention to courtesy first and then attack. The initial treatment of Jia Baoyu, the nanny, was quite exciting. The description of the situation where the protagonist gets along with the original characters in Red Mansions is also very good, and the language is very similar to the original Red Mansions. Later, when the protagonist's force value increased and his power became stronger, he let himself go. He became more and more reckless and unbridled, engaging in some dirty plots, such as feeding feces and urine, cutting off the enemy's private parts, and giving them to the emperor... He was more murderous, often killing the whole family, the Yi clan, etc., Soldiers would clear the way and kill people in the street. Wearing a big gold chain and a big gold watch, he never looks at any scene and just says some dirty words. The system also rewards young and Dangerous guys as subordinates. He feels like a nouveau riche, a gangster leader, and a soldier. The author said this is self-destruction, but I personally feel that he is more discouraged. After all, everyone basically does not like arrogant little gangsters. The characters rewarded by the system should be from novels, movies and TV series that the author likes. The characters created by the author in the past are quite good and can be considered plump and three-dimensional, such as Zhou Ying and Ren Ruyi. After the system rewarded more characters, the ones added were all the author's self-promotional characters, such as Brother Crow, which seemed incompatible with the background of the red building. The author's descriptions of the original characters and some of the original characters around the protagonist are basically always online, and the dialogue between the characters is lively and interesting. However, the protagonist often swears in his mouth and heart, is impulsive and irritable, can't make jokes, will retaliate after the slightest joke, threatens others at every turn, can't suffer any losses, and likes to escalate small conflicts into big feuds, and then kill the whole family. In short, the author's writing style in emotional description is very good, and he must have carefully studied the original work of Red Mansions. However, in the middle period, he felt very self-indulgent. The protagonist's image changed from a smart and capable ordinary person who intended to save the tragedy of the original work all the way to a free-wheeling gangster+patriot combination. You can read it and count it as food and fodder.

One of the few good books in Red Mansion, I like it very much

The wording in the book is very delicate, the writing is fluent, the characters are well-depicted, and the characters are distinct. It has a certain degree of prominence in fan fiction. If the update is faster and longer, I think I can give it five stars [laughing evilly] Well, I feel like four stars are too much. The protagonist travels through time but seems a bit reckless.

It's quite good. I like watching the delicate emotions so I came here to read it. I really like watching the daily interactions with Dai Chai and the others. I hope the author can maintain the big style of writing. Also, the volume is too small. I finished reading it in three days. It's not enough. It's not enough.

It's pretty cool to read the latest chapter. Except for the middle pictures where the author is a little bit young, everything else is very good. The protagonist's system is relatively strong. If you don't abuse the protagonist, you won't be defeated. If you don't accept it, just do it (don't be too picky, not many novels can withstand such subtle twists. Generally speaking, it's not a big problem. It just makes you want to read on). Don't care about the young age of the protagonist (original version of Red Mansion) The novel is not very old). Different from other Red Mansions, the author has changed the personalities of some characters, such as Jia Mu. In this story, Jia Mu is not always blindly biased towards Jia Baoyu. In the later period, the main character gradually became the main character (the protagonist can save the Jia family). The identity of the protagonist is also related to the royal family. It is not sure whether it is the child of the former prince or the emperor.

This book is not that book, leisurely, smiling tiger, decisive, wolf turns back, romantic, Cao Mengde