Lady Yae Miko, Stop Rushing Me!

Youxian is a new author who has just opened a book. The difference between his novels and the best-selling fast food and banquet novels is that the stories he writes are like a quietly flowing stream, neither fast nor slow. People can't help but follow it all the way down, like a cup of black tea, which makes people savor the sweetness and bitterness. His books are both sweet and bitter. There are ordinary and interesting daily life, but also thought-provoking character stories. He can see a real world through ordinary plots. The characters he describes are as if they are real. The contradictions and conflicts never seem abrupt, but they can make people unprepared. I hope he can continue to work hard to write and let the world in his heart never die.

Dear book friends~ I have received a lot of comments recently, and there are also many criticisms. I will reply here. Problems in criticism do exist, but this is also one of the reasons for the existence of this book. After all, it is my first book, and it is too normal for problems to exist. I welcome book friends to raise questions, and I am happy to exchange opinions with you (here I am complaining that the author of Tomato cannot see the paragraph comments in the background, and reading the comments from book friends has to go through chapter by chapter). In short, if you have any questions, feel free to ask them. Forget it this time, the next book will be revised. Sure enough, there is something so poisonous about this book that you really can't stand it and are angry. You can skip it or come to the comment area to talk about it. Book friends, hurry up and give me some experience [cool][cool][cool] Bad reviews will make me stronger! Finally, I shamelessly gave myself a five-star rating. About the new book. I'm writing, I'm writing, it's roughly a story about traveling through Liyue and slowly growing up to become a true king (because Liyue is relatively complicated, in the history of Payuan... I'm in a hurry just to arrange the timeline... So I'm writing it slowly...) The following is the new edition: New book has been released. The title of the book is Genshin: Records of Liyue's Development. In fact, I started updating it on May 15th, but it was not visible if it had less than 20,000 words, and it couldn't be searched unless I signed a contract. It took me a few days to write it down to 20,000 words. Now that the contract has been signed, I guess I can search for it in a while.

It's great. It's the best cp Yaegamiko article I've read so far. I just feel like there's a little little interaction between Tadpole and Yaegamiko as a couple. Or am I just fine with this everyday? Forget it, I don't understand. Anyway, I'm looking forward to the author's next book. Come on! ! ! [Blowing kiss]

A very good Genshin Impact daily novel, worth reading. The protagonist is Wen Chao Gong, but there is no plot of Wen Chao. It is more about the daily life of the protagonist in Inazuma, and getting along with the Genshin Impact characters, non-harem, pure friendship.

After reading the author's second book, I liked it so much that I came here to read the first one. The author will not limit the story to the existing main and branch lines in the game. It is easier to use the entire environment of Teyvat as the background to describe the story of "people". These ordinary people, living ordinary or extraordinary lives, are more likely to resonate with readers. Perhaps this has moved towards a real creation, rather than a simple fanfic. The initial writing skills are obviously immature, but the progress is also very rapid and obvious, so one star is deducted here. In addition, regarding the emotional drama, I have some personal humble opinion: the relationship has developed and progressed, but no matching scenes have been arranged. After analysis, it is found that the daily interactions are becoming more and more intimate, and the dull state of an old married couple has entered early, lacking the sparks that burst out when emotions break out. Therefore, from the reader's perspective, when determining the relationship, it is inevitable that it will be a little abrupt. Overall, it is a work that is easy to immerse in and get involved in after the early stages.

It's so beautiful. Why is it over? I wasn't very interested in the introduction of this book at first, but when I read it out of boredom, I started to like it more and more. It's been a long time since I found a book that I could keep reading to the end. Most of the books I read with gusto on the first day, I was too lazy to read the book the next day, but! This book forced me to finish reading it, even though it took me several days. I don't know how to describe it, but it's just to my liking. I even cried when I saw it afterwards [awkward laugh] I want to see more interactions between Duko and Shenzi. Woohoo.

The overall outline of this book is completely the ideal type in my mind, although the writing style is average (it just feels better sometimes, just a feeling, if I am wrong, please spray me qwq, I will not care if you spray me =)), if the writings written by those big guys are like a glacier, then the author should be like a small iceberg, which is a little bit attractive. I don't know if I listened to books in the early stage and was attracted to reading in the later stage. I feel that compared to the early stage, the later stage is a bit short (don't blame me if I'm wrong). It's like an airplane taking off. The early run-up and take-off is perfect, but the subsequent flight is a bit unstable, and Maybe most of the emotions are a bit obvious and could use more silence. For example, at the beginning, the protagonist actively responds to the death of his teammates. To be precise, he is optimistic. But later, as cherished partners die one after another, the protagonist breaks the defense, visits relatives with knives, kills people, and smashes the shogunate. All in all I thought it was well written, at least to my taste. My above suggestions may appear to be a bit over-the-top in front of the author. The author may have considered this possibility, but it is just my opinion and you can regard it as fart.

What can I say? This book has both knives and candies. What makes me most happy is that the characters in this book have their own thoughts, as if they have come to life, which left a deep impression on me. I like it very much and am very happy. It has always been with me when I read this book. Although the time is short, it left a long impression on me. I will never forget that I had this book in my life (. ❛ ᴗ ❛.)

This is my first five stars on Tomato. The author's writing style is really good, the description of emotions and the creation of characters are very good, and there are also many knives. (￢_￢) The overall transition is complete, the structure is reasonable, and it can be considered a good masterpiece. It has the sense of daily life and the unique charm of the second dimension. The author blends it very well, and it can make people very embarrassed from time to time. ˃ʍ˂ This book gave me the feeling that he did not deliberately create a character, but a person's character can be seen in every bit of text. Because this is a recommendation, I won't say too much about the plot. (=^▽^=) The characters are well created and the author is very responsible. All in all, I highly recommend it. (｡>∀<｡)

Except for soul penetration and some minor problems, most of them are okay. Come on, author! Such a protagonist is really rare in Tomato. Most of the protagonists in Tomato are scumbags.