The Heroine Says, 'If I Can Cultivate Immortality, Why Bother with Domestic Schemes?'

The plot is smooth, but the ages of the protagonists are not consistent. I stayed in Shenzhuang for 7 years, then 4 years, and then half a year. When I arrived at the sect, I was almost 12 years old, and then I was 9 years old.

Because I really like traditional immortality writing, I like this kind of treasured writing very much. The writing style is smooth and natural, and some minor flaws will not affect it. I hope the author will continue to write better works. [Like][Like][Like]

This book is well written and deserves high marks! The rating is too low! The author is a bit weak and the ending is a bit rushed! From beginning to end, it was very good. Looking forward to the new article!

It's nice to be able to see the ending description~ Five stars for encouragement. I hope your next book will have CP. I rarely read books without CP, let alone read to the end [laughing] Come on, big time.

The writing is quite good, clean, clear and delicate, and it didn't make me want to abandon the article when I saw the beginning! In fact, although the ending is concise, the author still tried his best to explain the heroine's follow-up. It's not bad👍It's not like some endings suddenly. It's quality [like] Keep up the good work💪

Beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡! You can write a sequel to ascend to the spiritual world, find the second half of the technique, and ascend to the fairy world. You can also write about why Yujue asked the powerful to terminate the contract with him and ask him to find the heroine. In the end, it is possible to let her ascend to the divine realm [laughing]

It's good-looking, the heroine is neat and tidy, she's also very diligent in cultivating immortals, and the space is used well, but the ending is a bit hasty and simple

It's good to watch, the plot is good, it's not a routine story, and the female supporting characters are not tools, they each have their own personalities.

The logic is rigorous, there is no female rivalry, there are many women in the protagonist group, and the plot is complete. Even if it is about to break the bank, the author still tries his best to justify himself. Some details are well described. The heroine is tenacious, brave and kind, cautious and bold, and has no CP. Looking forward to the author's next article, cheers author!

The heroine has never apprenticed to a teacher from beginning to end. It feels like she is mainly self-taught. She is cautious when things happen. She is caring but not a holy mother. The article is not verbose and quite attractive. It is worth reading. I hope the author will continue his efforts