Step by Step to Immortality: Senior Sister Ascends Again

It has a very everyday feel, and the story of the protagonist is told in a eloquent way. I don't know why, but when I read it, I felt like the tranquility of time has passed. Instead of using that kind of cliche plot to create a compact power gap or other reasons for being bullied, and then escalate to a slap in the face. Sensen works very hard. In terms of writing, as a new author, there will definitely be some shortcomings, but it can be seen that he is still improving, and I believe it will be better in the future. The plot is not a fierce collision, but a gentle and gentle feeling. This description is a bit inappropriate, but this is the feeling this book gave me. Finally, a small question. Chapter 3 says that the heroine is 15 years old, Chapter 11 says that she is 14 years old, and Chapter 15 says that she is 15 years old. I think it may be a typo accidentally. The second small problem is that the whole text has an ancient feel, but some small details have a strong modern flavor. I hope to make it perfect from the beginning.

Finally found another novel without a male protagonist that is not mindless! However, there is one thing worth mentioning. When the heroine showed her strength in this article, the author still felt that the control of the scene was a bit lacking, and he did not really write about the strong charm of the heroine. But personally, I am still looking forward to this book! Come on, author! [Love] (Actually, the rating was relatively low when I first read it, so I didn't have high hopes, but it's actually pretty good. So I give the author a five-star rating and try to get more people to read this book)

Give it a push! Although the ending is rushed and the writing in some parts is not very eye-catching, it is much better than those books that are so bad and long that you can't even finish it if you have the patience to read it. Encourage the author, come on!

Very, very good. I hope the author can write down the story of Liu Wanqing when he writes a novel about female channeling to immortality. After all, this book is really beautiful [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Definitely praise it! Although the ending is rushed, the writing is indeed very good. I hope the author can continue to work hard~ I also wish you can have the beautiful life you want! [Sending Hearts]

It's not a clichéd plot, every character has a memory point, it's not a one-sided paper character. The heroine's life experience is not just miserable for the sake of being miserable. Highly recommended.

Personally, I think it's quite interesting. Knowing that you are a young male author, I am very grateful to you for being able to write about a female protagonist! Although you did not take the college entrance examination, no one dares to say that you can only be successful if you go to college! If you like writing, just write well and look after you!

It's really enough for a new author. I still remember that I had a martial arts dream when I was in the second grade of junior high school. I also longed for the life of cultivating immortals and becoming gods. I also wrote a novel. Although I gave up the article after writing a few chapters [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart], so I think it is amazing to finish it. I hope the author will get better and better in the future.

Although the length is short and the writing style is a bit immature, it is the author's first book and it is still very well written. I hope that future female videos will see your non-CP fairy tales.

The ending was a little rushed, but it was really nice [blowing kiss]