The Fairy Li Yueqing

Traditional family cultivation of immortality, Qi refining, foundation building, Zifu, golden elixir, Yuanying, and god transformation. Dads, you are my eternal gods! Come on come on. The level is limited and it is difficult to make a big breakthrough in a short period of time! Shamelessly ask fellow Taoists to leave a five-star review!

So far, it seems to be okay. The overall story is at a very comfortable pace. The portrayal of the family and the shaping of the characters are pretty good, with relatively few poisonous points. There are some cool points in the story, but they are relatively simple and not obvious, but they are still acceptable. This book is generally good, but I guess it won't be popular on Tomato because the pace is really slow. Although it is very comfortable to read, with the popularity of fast food literature nowadays, people are more willing to read novels with faster pace and more exciting plots. This book is destined to be a niche one, which can only be said to be a pity.

It's said that Dumei is the best. . . You're not really going to have a baby, are you?

The author is great, Li Yueqing and Qin Qiongyu are not Lily.

The early plot is a bit lighthearted However, the author portrayed the character very well and did not make the protagonist invincible. This is rare. It can be said that this novel is a clear stream of time travel literature. I also like the depiction of those skills, professions, and spiritual roots. The plot of each chapter complements this world view This is one of the more amazing novels I read this year, but it's more daily-oriented, but it's also quite ambitious. I hope the author can continue to update with this quality. I am still looking forward to the direction of the plot in the future. Come on

The author's writing style is light and playful, and you won't be able to stop reading it! The subject matter of the novel is novel and unique, the characters are vivid, and even the monsters are so cute! The protagonist is the story of Li Yueqing, a modern and courageous young man who reverses gender and travels to a small foundation-building family in the Xiaoluo world. He embarks on the path of cultivating immortality, fighting monsters and leveling up along the way, and finally takes on the important responsibilities of the family. If we say who is the most evil person in this novel, it is those cultivators who expose the weaknesses of human nature for the sake of money and cultivation resources. This is the world of immortal cultivation, and it reflects the human world. There is no CP in the novel, but I suspect that the author deliberately broke them up to leave readers with a little regret.

I still quite like mortals cultivating immortals. Because it's more hardcore. At every turn, a golden elixir is obtained and transformed into a god. So boring. So I feel like it could have been. Come on! ! ! [Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post]

It's good-looking, better than 80% of Tomato's immortality novels. It really has the flavor of a family cultivating immortality. You can see the development and growth of the family step by step. It's a breath of fresh air. By the way, the author has a novel "Family Cultivation of Immortality, I am the Clan Spiritual Beast" which is also very good in the genre of family cultivation of immortality. It is very well written. You can refer to the author [Like] @ Author, please give me a boost By the way, if you want your novel to be long and not bloated, you must prepare an outline [note]

Let me talk about my feelings. First of all, this book is really slow-paced and suitable for long-term reading. It is quite interesting to read now, but it feels like it lacks the inner feelings of the protagonist after turning into a girl. Also, the plot is a bit bland. The protagonist did not make good use of his own advantages after turning into a girl. It was quite interesting to watch the scene where he acted coquettishly with the real Zong. The funny and nonsensical plot in the latter part is a bit less. I feel that more can be added. Also, is the heroine so beautiful that no one covets her beauty? You can also write here. The character of Shi Chenglong is well drawn, and his sad exit later is also great. Although the protagonist is devoted to the truth, the daily comedy and cuteness can be more integrated. Children love to watch it. In fact, the plot of the protagonist hooking up with the young lady can also be written in more detail. I grinned from ear to ear [snickering] [snickering] [smirking]

In modern society, Li Yueqing seems to be born with a heart to cultivate immortality. He can always feel a magical power from the vitality of nature and the joy of the people around him. Therefore, after graduating from school, he chose to work and maintain his health in a slow-paced place at a young age. One night, he was stabbed in the heart by a gangster and died because of his righteousness. He just lived an ordinary life. When he woke up again, his soul had penetrated into the body of a little Lolita from a small foundation-building family in the Xiaoluo world, who seemed to have some intellectual problems. Li Yueqing, who has always been optimistic, quickly accepted the fact that his soul had changed gender, and then began his dream of cultivating immortality. Li Yueqing, no, her name is Li Yueqing now. When she was testing the spiritual roots in her family, she was lucky enough to be found to have three spiritual root qualifications, a foundation-building seed, and the family's treasure, so the family elders had high hopes for her. Li Yueqing's protagonist halo allows her to sell a talisman at a market stall in exchange for some rare items, including a first-order meteorite and a pure white magic weapon fragment. The latter is simply a life-saving magic weapon. In the end, Li Yueqing was passed down the Blue Sea Immortal Secret by the Wanfa Dao Monument. This secret not only gave Li Yueqing a special physique and turned him into Tang Monk flesh, but also allowed him to break through Xiao Luo's realm... In short, this is a work that can bring people a relaxed and enjoyable reading experience. The author's writing style is humorous and playful, and his imagination is rich and colorful. I have been reading it.