I Became a Girl: Cultivating Immortality in the City

What others wrote was a bit unsatisfying, but I felt that I could do it, so I wrote one myself. Of course I want to give it good reviews! After all, I wrote the book myself. If I don't support myself, who will support me? 🍉 🍉 🍉

In three years, I only advanced from the middle stage of Qi training to the late stage of Qi training. I also said that I should work hard to become stronger. I have a system and defeat points. I don't use it to improve my level, but use it to check other people's level! So what do you need a system for? It is better to change the system to a weak system that can only be used to check other people's realms.

The heroine's system is too useless and one star is deducted. The heroine can't walk when she sees a good-looking man. One star is deducted. [Pouts]

It's pretty cool, but the settings are a bit too low. It would be more interesting to set the earth as a world most severely suppressed by laws and connect various different worlds. This also explains why the order on earth is so good, because no matter how strong you are, no matter how high your cultivation level is, you can't get much stronger, and the laws are severely suppressed.

The system pulls, people pull too, and it takes three years to get promoted.

Baihe, a harem novel about Lily, is written in an excellent way, with very few descriptions of women's clothing and female bodies, and zero descriptions of female abortion. The heroine is not strong in combat, it is an urban + different world fairy tale, with a good setting, the emotional line is quite smooth, the second and third girls are all roommates, the description of the battle scenes is okay, and the writing is worth collecting.

I think it would be better if the protagonist is stronger

The heroine who cultivates immortality becomes more and more beautiful. It is interesting. You can read it and look forward to the subsequent updates.. 🤭

The setting is so novel. I originally just wanted to watch the beginning, but I didn't expect that I couldn't stop [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Interesting, it successfully caught my attention [laughing evilly]