The Deathless Doctor

The plot starts to be slow, like the one who is also the city lord, and in the middle and late stages it becomes very slow and annoying. I feel like we can add a main plot or something similar to barrage, because there are a lot of knives and complaints. If we add barrage, the impression will definitely be improved. It can be a barrage where the protagonist travels to the previous world, because there are many topics in this way, similar to the barrage of "First Player". It's best to give the protagonist a little help so that he has the idea to keep it. In addition, adding barrage will definitely increase the word count, which can be regarded as saving Uncle Nanyao's worries. In addition, you can recommend it among old books. There is nothing embarrassing. Some people will not pay much attention to the author, but will pay attention to the work. If I were not a book famine, I would not have discovered this new book. When I discovered it, it had more than 200 chapters. When writing about world games, if you don't know what subject to write about, it's very simple. You can use books you've written before as material. I believe many old fans will recognize and agree with it. You can even write some linkages, such as some legends are the protagonists of old books, so that you can please... No, satisfy old readers without affecting new readers, and also attract new readers to read the previous books. Also, I miss my boss (more than one)

Although it's still the same old routine, I still gave it five stars. Uncle Nan Yao, can't you be a little innovative? If your book writing routine never changes or innovates, your writing skills will never improve.

They are all perfect. The only shortcoming is probably that it is too slow and not enough to watch. Uncle Yao [almost crying] [almost crying] [crying]

Very good book The author is really awesome. The book was released on September 26th and now has more than 200 chapters. The donkeys in the production team have to call out "Senior" when they see it.

Uncle, I beg you to finish it. You can buy it as a gift. I already felt it from the first White Bird chapter. This book can surpass Agui. Uncle @uncle

It's still good, but it's too arrogant, and too far-fetched. The whole world answered him, and the rest is nothing, just adding a little bit of knife occasionally [smile][smile][smile][smile] It's a pity that Uncle Yao's books are so short every time. What a pity[cry][cry]

Very exciting, very beautiful. It fits my point of view on otherworldly literature. However, these recent chapters feel a bit draggy to me, and many paragraphs could be described in one sentence. In addition, this book downplays the description of level realm, or even does not have it, which is great. The characters in it are not said to be ridiculously strong, and the story's acting style focuses on one intelligence.

Bai Yi is not a killer, has no boss, and has no sister. ? I have a sister

Soon the waves will end

I don't know much about the professional knowledge of so many books, but I saw that I didn't want Luya to cry and reduced the use of abilities, I saw that friendship was extremely cherished because of the loss of a close relative, and I saw another priest Miriam. Character arcs, childhood encounters and their impact. I like this book