Hot-Blooded: Punching My Way to the Absolute Top

It's okay, but it's too slow. It takes four or five days to update one page, which is outrageous.

There is one poisonous point. The protagonist was attacked after returning to school, and then he knelt down to his former boss, and then he turned out to be a traitor. Then he was beaten half to death by the crowd. Let's not talk about how to deal with the follow-up, Dadu is sure. The character of the protagonist is also very difficult to like. He is a madman who only wants to fight, and then let him go through some experiences and slowly grow up? Isn't this a rheumatic male template?

The author is in a bad mental state

You, the author, are not naive. Isn't it embarrassing that you betrayed you out of nowhere in the early stage? It gave me goosebumps all over my body And your betrayal was simply inexplicable. You didn't explain it, and you didn't recall how good the relationship between the male protagonist and him was, and then it was inexplicably sensational. Domestic trash love movies are not as low-level as you. You want to express this plot but you can't describe it at all, so why should you? Such rubbish writing

Keep going, don't stop

Come on. It's very exciting to watch.

Mad, that's it? That's it? I'm looking so excited [cover my face] [cover my face]

I'll check back a year later to see if it's finished, because the author has mastered the basics and is also a eunuch in FeiL. Come back after it's over

Because I know almost everything about this guy

Good luck, author!