Overlord of the Still Domain

It's good to read, I love reading [Blowing Kisses][Flowing Kisses][Flowing Kisses], it's rare that I fell in love with it, the author is still writing a book that is constantly being updated and improved. Someone has already made a long comment on the content. There is nothing more to say. It's specific enough! I just want to say that the three organizations of life, death, and abortion are a bit too big a trap no matter how you look at them. The author must come back! Just update it once a day. Don't force yourself. As long as it doesn't suck, I'm here, I'll always be there! Three free gifts a day, sooner or later I ranked second on the list. I'm just curious, author, how many Power Generations for Love have you watched? Number one on the fault list? ! ! ! [Manual dog head]

Come on, I still like to watch it. I hope I can write about it from school days to college graduation, during which campus life is combined with supernatural powers. I like to watch this kind of subject the most [Cool] Come on, I will continue to support you [Blow kiss] It's about not being too exaggerated when fighting. In fact, other novels are always earth-shattering and a bit exaggerated. Can you take your time and expand slowly? [Thinking] This is a little suggestion [Blow kiss]

It's so awkward. After reading 6 chapters, I was confused for the first three chapters. I feel like I should just start reading the fourth chapter. Isn't it good to write the first few chapters at the back? There is also the heroine who likes it very much, but when I read the comments, there is no comment, I feel bad. I think the first few chapters of the hero and heroine can be written as a normal urban romance novel. The heroine is cheerful and active, and the hero is shy. There shouldn't be another one later. Suddenly something unexpected happened and then I started writing about superpowers. I immediately didn't want to read it anymore. I suggest that if you start writing about Gao Wu, either the heroine should not get involved too much in the protagonist's affairs, or you should have a single heroine who relies on each other in battles, or you can have multiple heroines, one of whom helps the protagonist at each stage. The two of them are so sweet at the beginning, but many people may not be able to stand it when they write about it later. Well, I hope the author gets better and better as he writes more. I actually like Gao Wu and his emotional line.

Seeing now, the heroine of the book is about to cry. She feels that their relationship cannot allow one more person. As for Lanmao [Thinking] - the relationship between sister and brother is not bad either [laughing evilly]

After struggling in the persimmon for a long time, I feel that the persimmon has become a sea of ​​poisonous spots... And you, Bai Jiang, your book is like a breath of fresh air. The low rating is not your fault, and the lack of comments is not your problem... Update soon! Draw Yaoyao to life for me! Write a blessing to my brother Yu! Don't listen to those who care about single women and double women! The story needs it, the story is reasonable, write it, write it fiercely! Update soon!

I saw the second volume, overall it is good. Many people in the comment area hope to have a single female protagonist. I can have a single female protagonist and two female protagonists, but at most it can only have two female protagonists. Xu Xiyao is trapped. The author said that it will not be released until the end of the year. Also, does what happened in the first chapter at the beginning have to be in the future? The plot next year? The author hurry up and update, take good care of yourself, pay attention to safety when you go out, don't get into trouble before Xu Xiyao comes out, and don't suddenly stop updating and disappear [smile][smile][smile] Otherwise I will kill you offline! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's a very good book. Although it's a little boring in the early stage and doesn't match the fast pace of Tomato, you can feel it getting better as you go to the back. As for the single and double heroines, just look at it later. The author is also constantly shaping the image of the two heroines. It's a very good book.

Hmm... As for the author, there are no big problems elsewhere, but can you strengthen the protagonist for me?

Come on, come on, come on

You call this a sweet article? What kind of sweet text is like yours.