HP: When Snape Found a Reclusive Brian

I really want to cry, when will they have a sweet love? I can't tell now whether Xiver has a protagonist in his heart. Help [I'm about to cry]

This book is really good. Although most people complain that "Snape's love for Brian cannot be seen" and "it feels like Brian's wishful thinking", I can see that his love is hidden in his actions and words, hidden in his bad-toned but caring words to Brian, hidden in his behavior of allowing Brian to stay in his personal space. At the same time, he was also touched by Brian's behavior after moving in but not daring to make any random moves without his consent [Adoration] Anyway, I love it, although it is indeed a bit OOC. But cheers for the author! ↖(^ω^)↗It's really beautiful!

Okay, I read it from beginning to end with a frown, but that's not to say it's bad. On the contrary, I think from the perspective of a sadistic novel, it's a first-rate sadistic novel. The teacher is very good at cutting people with a blunt knife, plainly sad, and the writing is very delicate. When I read the last sentence, it was written directly without an outline, I was even more surprised. This article was a bit confusing for me. Many places were not connected and I couldn't understand it. Some of the characters were too different from what I imagined. However, I didn't take it seriously because the male protagonist's family is a prophecy family. They are basically crazy. From the perspective of the male protagonist who comes from such a family, of course his perspective is a bit incomprehensible. Yes, it's crazy. In addition, his family is very mysterious, he himself is also quite mysterious, and his life experience is caught in a time loop, so his story is more likely to be confusing. So I actually always thought that the teacher made this article so contradictory on purpose. I didn't expect that there is no outline [face covering], but this also means that the teacher's writing skills are online. If there is an outline, this article will be even more powerful. The trio of Voldemort, Abu and Brian have a close relationship as brothers and friends. The male protagonist is of a higher seniority. Most of the characters in the original work are children to him. The trio also dotes on several children, which is very cute. Even Lucius was just a child in front of Voldemort and Brian. It was so funny that Voldemort just threw a toy to Lucius and let him play with it. Before Abu's death, he voluntarily became his Death Eater servant in order to prevent Voldemort from feeling insecure. Voldemort seemed not to care much about him as a servant, and Abu seemed to fear him as his master. In fact, they were still friends, and Abu still cared about him. After Abu's death, Voldemort's words to Brian and his own psychological activities were always inseparable from Abu [crying]. He said that there was nothing interesting about a dead servant and a tombstone. In fact, it was better to go see it. I just don't think Snape and Brian have a strong sense of cliché, but because the teacher didn't have an outline, he wrote down everything he thought of, so he didn't pay attention to Snape's emotional changes in a long part. It's normal for his emotions to be stiff [crying] But if the teacher insists on saying that this is a sweet article. . All I can say is that the writing is so bad [crying] It's so cruel π_π has no sweetness at all Of course, the sorting of children of several generations and the selection of godfathers are still a little bit different. Harry entered Ravenclaw and so on, which is a bit unimaginable. I still prefer his trio [crying] And Tom ends up dead. . . After all, he has some unparalleled ambitions. As long as his ambitions are still there, Dumbledore will not be able to tolerate him, even if he is a very good family member from the male protagonist's perspective. But he is endangering the world. It's acceptable to be abused But why did you erase the male protagonist's memory of Voldemort? [Crying] It tortures me to death There is also the family line between Brian's father and Brian. I originally thought that his father was full of malice when he appeared, and he was a powerful figure with another generation of black and white demons. However, because there was no outline, he was just a madman after the truth came out. A poor madman who lost his wife and child and went completely crazy. After seeing his son again, he refused to admit that the male protagonist is his son. His setting is a bit different from what I expected, which is a pity. It seems like there are a lot of problems after saying so much, but this article is really worth reading, but it is not a light-hearted writing style, nor is it very hehe. Many people have a sad ending. Still the same sentence, top-notch sadistic writing, sweet writing that can't be tolerated [Like] All in all, I give it a high score In addition, I don't think it's a bad ending, just a bit rushed. There may be a few extras to explain the endings of other characters and how they will be better after the war. What happens to the male protagonist and Snape after he is forced to lose his memory is not said. Some are too blank. But it's still within the blank range and can't be said to be bad. I think

The characters written by the author have clear personality traits, the environment and atmosphere are great, and the connections are natural. And I like Brian very much. I fell in love with this character as soon as I saw it. He has an inexplicable sense of fate that attracts me. I like him very much [blowing kiss]

Nice! When will the love between Black and Severus come to fruition (it feels like it's all about knives and no sugar). I want to see the confession. I can't figure out who Severus loves, it seems like he still loves his ex-girlfriend after breaking up (?) Black and Riddle have a bit of a quarrel (?) (My parents are healthy. The above is just random thoughts. I may offend you. I like this book very much. I don't mean to criticize it.)

How can I put it... I feel that the period when Brian was chasing Severus was a bit confusing, that is... If you like someone who has a crush on you, even if you reject him, some feelings will be revealed inadvertently, especially the psychological description, which will be more complicated. The confession of love, to be honest, made me feel a bit stiff and the change was a bit big👀 But overall, it was still very good, and there were things I liked very much, especially the part about friendship. I also like the background of the character Brian very much. The story behind the family is revealed at the end. This sense of mystery is really good (//∇//). The writing is also very smooth. I just hope the author pays more attention to the psychological description. This is really a plus.

Too little. What exactly does Sev think about Brian? , Be anxious

This is my first time to write a book review. I think it is a great book... The Riddle in it is my favorite Riddle I have ever seen. He is flesh and blood, bad, but sometimes a little cute. He is indulgent towards Klein and hides some of his own bad qualities. He changed his methods several times because of him. But in the end Riddle died because bad is still bad. How can I put it this way... A bad person may not necessarily be terrible in every aspect, but when you are immersed in it and forget about it, you will realize at the end that he is a hopeless and complete villain no matter what. Alas, I really like Riddle in this article, including the fact that the person he misses the most is Abu... Flesh and blood, with full personality and charm. Okay, let me say it one last time, Riddle, who really loves this article😭

After reading it, it was very interesting. In the early stage, Brian was too good to Severus, so much so that many people felt that it was better to let Brian fly solo. However, maybe the author wrote it too secretly, or failed to write the feeling of transformation, which led most people to feel that Brian had been giving without receiving corresponding rewards. Later, Voldemort's matchmaking allowed the two of them to make rapid progress, and then the warm scenes described before the decisive battle were really healing. The relationship between Brian and Tom was enviable, so I think it would be better if Brian did not lose his memory. At least there would be a close friend who would remember him and visit him from time to time. It felt a little confusing in the early stage, but it got better in the later stage. Most of the pitfalls were filled, and it became sweet. Nice!

Author, are you afraid that you have read too many sadistic articles? Could this be a sweet article? When I look at it, I want Brian to switch to CP [crazy]