Being a Senior Brother Is No Easy Task

It's unremarkable yet natural. It's so well written. God!

Not bad, but a pity, come on.

How can I put it, the biggest highlight of this book is the protagonist, who perfectly runs through the sentence "Heehee covering Wei Junjie" [Funny JPG·] The plot is exciting, but the characterization is not enough. I believe it will be improved in subsequent writings. To be precise, the plot is not slow, but the process of getting closer to the title is a bit long, probably because this has persuaded many people to turn away. It is undeniable that this is indeed a good book, and it is a pity for readers to tell this. I can't stand it anymore. Although the writing was cumbersome at first, it still flows smoothly. Especially after Xuan Chengzi came back, this feeling became more obvious. For example, if two people enter the ring, just the two of them enter the ring. Most of the people watching the ring want to see you fight. There is no need for so many cumbersome physical and psychological descriptions. New author, understandable. But if you feel pressured to write this novel, I suggest you take it easy first. I definitely had some expectations when I started writing, and the writing became smoother. Later on, I could clearly feel the author's pressure. Slow down, just relax My suggestion is that you try to create a good image of the protagonist first. Don't bite off more than you can chew, take care of the protagonist first, and then slowly get involved with other characters. After all, it is still very difficult for newcomers to write serious group portraits. That's it

I feel like there are many female protagonists, but don't, the author, pure love is invincible! [Cry][cry][cry]

Not bad, it's rare to see such refreshing senior writing.

It looks good, but it's gone. It's a pity.

After reading the part about Jiang Xin's rebirth, I couldn't help but comment. I guess the author must have read a lot of novels before writing. Even if something is wrong, he wrote it carefully. Every character's experience in the book is the protagonist in any book. Interesting,

Not bad, but a pity

It's interesting, I like it. Although five stars cannot be reached, I'll give it to you [I understand]

It's pretty good-looking, and I think it's OK