My Junior Sister Is Delicate and Frail, How Could She Be the Great Demon Lord?

Nice! It's just that the emotional line is a bit baffling, the male and female villains are too stereotyped, and I feel like I could dig deeper into it, and it's a bit boring to torture them all the time. The heroine's sand sculpture attributes are very interesting, and the setting of the martial arts sisters and brothers is very innovative. I can't help but guess what my next classmate will be like.

So far, there is nothing sinister about it. It is very exciting and can make people read it without getting bored. There is a setting that I like very much. All the members are "evil". The heroine's brothers and sisters all think that each other is a cultivator of immortality. Except for herself, they are all righteous people. As a result, they are all people who follow the wrong path. The so-called evil cultivators in the mouth of the righteous people have actually hidden it from each other for so many years. The master of the heroine is a monster who has become an immortal. He has just entered the world. He is simple and knows how to be grateful. His disciples, including the heroine, all pampered him and kept all the bad things from him. For example: the heroine and several senior brothers and sisters later knew that each other was not on the right path, but the heroine and the master did not know, and they had a tacit understanding to hide it from him.

Good-looking [adoration][adoration][adoration] (Please don't stop updatingＯ(≧▽≦)Ｏ) The heroine is the kind of character who must take revenge when she wants revenge. Although she is a little weak at this stage, she will use external help and has her own understanding and direction of survival in the world of immortality. The male protagonist is strong and the interaction between the two is very visual. The development of the characters also has the feeling of a progress bar (it is not that Mary Sue won 100% of everyone's favor at the beginning). The plot line is also well developed. The writing style is light and funny. Overall, it is good. Keep up the good work. Come on ٩(*´◒`*)۶

It's a very good book. I disliked the male protagonist at first. I thought he was an old man who couldn't recognize himself. But after a closer look, I found that the logic of his behavior was appropriate. He was not as speechless as I thought, and he was not as inexplicable as the male protagonists in some books. His wonderful possessiveness, even if he doesn't want the heroine to touch others, it's because he doesn't want to be touched, and it won't hinder the heroine's normal social interactions. For example, if the heroine is sleepy and a senior brother wants to carry her, the Demon King won't complain about anything. He likes people who don't care. Moreover, the heroine has been training the devil to let him talk to her as an equal. I think it is very interesting. The most important thing is that this book has brains from the protagonist to passers-by to the villain. Even if you can't guess the truth, you can still guess half of it.

The plot is not bad, but the descriptions of the characters' speeches are always in long paragraphs, which feels very flat. It might be better to intersperse some descriptions of eyes, movements, etc. When the characters' speeches have emotional changes. It might be better to add some continuation parts.

I came here from Douyin recommendation, come on, update quickly, otherwise you will forget the plot as time goes by [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

I was attracted when I first started reading the first chapter, and I couldn't help but read on. From the beginning, the heroine and the hero were in a relationship of mutual use. The heroine is very smart, and the relationship between the two people is also very delicately described, and there is a feeling of pulling each other. Overall it looks great, recommended

It's so beautiful [crying][crying][crying][crying] The most interesting article on cultivating immortals to my liking, madam, madam, madam, it's so beautiful. Let's talk about the beautiful points in detail. In terms of writing style, the author's writing techniques are simply perfect and talented. It makes his eyes light up again and again. The author is very skilled in the use of words. It feels like he has a natural sensitivity to words. In terms of the plot, it is interconnected and has a lot of foreshadowing. It is not like the template of cultivating immortals. This is a very new character and a novel plot. In terms of character creation, there is no absolute good and evil. People in the immortal sect also have a malicious side. Although the male protagonist is from the demon world, he is also gradually developing feelings. Poor people must be hateful, and hateful people must have miserable suffering. It is very vivid and vivid. The other people in the sect also have distinct personalities. The female protagonist looks quite bad, but she is actually very smart. It feels like the male protagonist is the body and the female protagonist is the brain. The female protagonist is laying out step by step (who understands the child-faced wolf😄) In terms of emotional lines, although the male and female protagonists are using each other, they are also accepting each other bit by bit. The male protagonist is becoming more and more tolerant. The male protagonist's concessions are just right. Although the female protagonist is defensive, she sometimes teases the male protagonist, but the progress is a bit slow. I hope the author will write 500 chapters and develop slowly😁(🔪) The last thing is whether the author can suddenly scare us and add 100,000 words in one day😀😃😄😁😆 I just feel that there is a small hole. There is not much description of the heroine's previous life. I don't know if the author plans to write it in detail later or something. The beginning is a bit too sloppy. The wonderful plot later makes up for this part, but this small hole is not filled. In addition, the temperament of the heroine Zisha changed drastically. People around me have no doubts about the heroine. Fill it in, fill it in, please update me soon! I've been raising the text for a year and haven't finished updating it [crying][crying][crying][crying]

Nice! Hahahahahahahaha I laughed so much that my stomach hurts! Senior brother, senior sister, and master are also really interesting. They are not cliché at all. Hurry up and update more quickly!

The writing is pretty good. I like all the characters of the supporting characters. They are not mindless darlings, and they will show kindness to the heroine for various reasons. But when I see the emotional line, I can't. I can be regarded as a heroine. After reading the first seventy chapters, I still find the male protagonist annoying. The setting given by the author is that the male protagonist can only leave prison and borrow the female protagonist's body to find a physical resurrection if he needs the female protagonist. Since the female protagonist is given the trait of intelligence to negotiate with the male protagonist, then I think this negotiation is not mutually beneficial. The female protagonist holds the card that the male protagonist needs her and she is not afraid of death, so she has the upper hand. One more caveat: People who like to open the comment section to read novels and are female advocates may feel aggrieved after reading it. Because some of the comments are very similar to the comments made by netizens in mindless comments. For example, some things the male protagonist does will be attributed to being in love and jealous. Besides! Isn't it reasonable to treat others the same way you treat them? Why do you say this is a trap? This is a female video!