Madara’s Journey to Teyvat

I directly give myself a five-star review!

Not bad, another thing: it would be better to add the title of the book and your pen name on the cover (By the way, did Madara accept this major failure so quickly? Should there be more psychological description? (More updates [laughing] The front part is pretty good, but the back part feels like the control of the characters is not quite there. (After thinking about it, I might as well give a five-star encouragement...

I sleep in spring without waking up, The author travels everywhere. Not only is it not updated, There is still very little content. If you don't update. In the beginning, human beings are inherently good, and the author is a bad guy. If you don't update, I don't like it. Let's see what you do in the future. Smashed the pot and sold the iron, still less than a cent and a half If you update, I will like it and I will make a lot of money for you.

Not only is it possible, it is simply very good! But it's not enough to read, not enough at all! [Anger]

There are many people who write this kind of thing, but there are really very few people who stick to it till the end. I hope you are one of them.

Well written, this is Uchiha Madara's character.

It looks good, but my personal suggestion is that even if he is not the Sixth Path, Zhongli should not be able to crush him casually when he hits him. It is okay to strengthen Zhongli appropriately, but I always feel that it is a bit too much. One is a country and one is a star [face covering] However, the content is still very interesting. I support [smile]

It's still pretty good looking, kitten brother, if you don't update it, your kitten will be cut off.

The plot is very good, but the author is too short. My sister-in-law is so pitiful.

Mainly because Ban was cut too hard [laughing]