Reborn, My Wife Took the Initiative to Pursue Me

Can the author update it quickly? [Anger] Who can read such a small update?

A failed marriage, no one wants to do it again. Memory does not lie. Doing it again is like tearing up a bad composition, but the traces are already there.

First of all, I would like to give my affirmation. This book is excellent. Come on, author. I think you wrote it very well. This book is a breath of fresh air in Tomato. Moreover, the paragraphs are not procrastinating, and the male protagonist's thoughts are also described very delicately. It can be seen that the author has put some thought into this aspect and the writing is very good. Moreover, in this kind of novel, I actually see a sense of logic. I have to say, this is really outstanding and great. A logical plot can make the novel even better. I have high expectations for this novel, and I hope the author will continue to work hard (of course, you must also take a proper rest, after all, with a clear mind, the storyline you come up with will be more rigorous, more logical, and more outstanding). Of course, there is still a shortcoming in this book, that is, in the new chapter, there seems to be a problem with the logic. After all, the heroine's reason for entering the entertainment industry is a bit far-fetched. I hope the author will figure out the plot of the story clearly and round out this reason. Otherwise, there will be big problems with the logic, and the reading experience of the readers will also be affected. Also, in fact, the author can portray the heroine's emotions more delicately, and can also make the storyline closer to life (such as describing some characters' psychology, and giving some appropriate descriptions of the environment in the emotional plot). Of course, these require some effort and energy, but if you can do this, then your book will be more outstanding and more exciting. The following is my hope. I hope that the book will have a HE ending (that is, a good ending, not cruel), plus some description of the environment. If this is the case, the book will be further sublimated and the plot will be more twists and turns. After all, the manager will have more difficulties to make the male and female protagonists feel better. The love is deeper, and don't dig your own grave, and don't deliberately create some boring plots (never let the heroine enter the entertainment industry, otherwise the price of the book will drop, and don't engage in plots where a third party intervenes (such as a cuckold plot), these are not allowed, otherwise the book will be ruined,) Finally, I hope the author can write better. If the author reads my review, I also hope the author can read my opinion. I hope this book can be better. This book is sweet with a little cruelty. I hope the author will not write it badly. Moreover, the final ending of this kind of book is best to be a HE ending (that is, a friendly ending, not a sadistic ending), and I also hope it is a HE ending. This is not only my opinion, but also my demand.

Come on, support me, the early stage is very good, I hope the plot in the middle and later stages won't be too mediocre, otherwise I won't be able to watch it anymore

I may have a rough idea of ​​what you want to write, but after reading the chapter you wrote now, I still want to say a digression. Rebirth is not about changing people. Some journeys will still have the same final destination if they are retaken, just like the inertia of history. After all, the author was trapped by his own dilemma setting, so that now he no longer knows where to start.

Be careful, brother, otherwise are you worthy of this five-star rating?

Art comes from life. The author's writing is very real and the plot is also very twisty. Rebirth is actually just a prop. I think some things will never change no matter how many times, like the love between An and Gu. Each other's qualities attracted each other, so the two got married. But marriage is an existence where both parties tolerate each other. I think if they cannot tolerate each other, the marriage will definitely break down.

Subjective: I really like this kind of book and highly recommend it. Objective: The plot is relatively bland (probably due to imitation), but the grasp of the characters is relatively good, and the speed of the drawing is relatively gentle, which can make people's hearts clear of distracting thoughts and make it easier to appreciate the warmth. Finally, I would like to make some personal suggestions. The words in some places are a bit cumbersome (for example, just say celebrities) <Quietly bb: Don't interrupt, brother...

I don't know what direction the plot will take later, but the front part is good.

In fact, you are not a bad author. Look at the book next door with a score of 5.6. Do you feel that you are very good after comparing it with this?