Pokemon: I Found a Lunala

I feel like giving that kid one. Sunshine feels a bit wasteful

In fact, it's okay. Although there are problems with the writing in the early stage and some descriptions are not very clear, I feel that the biggest problem is still the evaluation of Sakura League. To be honest, many fans will be like this (I personally have no objection, but I read the novel not to watch you watch Anti-Japanese War, but to relax). After reading too much, it becomes a bit annoying. Then when I took the croaking frog, it was really okay to reveal my second identity? Although his family seems to belong to the Lord Peace, I don't know anything about it (a little bit, but not much). It feels a bit poisonous to directly expose the second identity, but it's okay! It's pretty good to ignore these, and then there is another person who got Sun God. In fact, I don't have any objections to the other person, but I think his role needs to be reduced. It feels like he has no strength and is just luck. Moreover, he is not a passionate idiot like Ash Ketchum, and he doesn't like Pokémon very much. Then I personally feel that some details were not written, and the early writing was somewhat problematic, but the plot is still good. At least in many other Pokémon stories, I have never seen how to take care of brothers. And in fact, the identity of the protagonist as a killer can be reconciled with an explanation later. In fact, I felt that there was a problem with the identity of the protagonist at the beginning, but I can accept it after seeing the explanation. Then the death in the previous life was a bit hasty. Come on, author! Overall, it's not a big problem. I've watched it for three nights now.

It looks good, it would be nice if there were more mythical beasts

I like this rhythm very much. This is my character. I don't know if others will like it. I only know that I want to like it. Five-star praise must be given

Very good. This plot idea gives me a good feeling. It's not like other games that are always cheating. However, it would be great if this cheat could also make me more hands-on and create various things.

The plot is good, with a strong human touch. The routine of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger is not brilliant but it can't go wrong. There is a sense of fun, but it's a bit small. The character of the protagonist is quite well developed, but the part of self-analysis can be placed earlier. Then there's the guy named Xiao, who doesn't give me any good impressions at the moment. I wonder what the author wants to do, is it to create a good-luck, hot-blooded idiot? Is that okay? ! But why should good luck be snatched from the protagonist? None of his current Pokémon are lower than the King's qualifications. The first one was given to him on his own initiative, the second one picked up the protagonist, and the third one grabbed the protagonist after the Poké Ball fell into the lake. I really want to accuse him of being like Gou Hao, but he actually didn't do anything wrong, because from the time he appeared to the chapters I saw, I don't know if I can write enough chapters. If he wants to make a big mistake, there is no space for him to write it. He usually doesn't write it, but if he writes it, it means he can pick up the big mistakes. I'll look at it later [laughs] I see stories about common people being bullied by powerful people, and I see stories about powerful people being bullied by ordinary people [Like] Anyway, it's easy to bully the protagonist. This is how you pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger. No matter how tough you are, someone will step on you when you are pretending. When you are not acting, the reward is not great enough, but it feels unsatisfactory. The protagonist has a mythical beast, but it occupies a very small space. It's something you only think of when you mention it during a conference, let alone the combat power. And the billion-dollar land has no sense of existence. When I bought it so big, I thought I was going to grab an ecological chain, but it turned out that with all my body and body combined, it was difficult to even form a second team. I was afraid that the protagonist would spend hundreds of millions of dollars to buy elf supplies and then fly. Maybe the style is not to my liking, so it's a bit uncomfortable to watch.

Fire Fist is a physical skill, but Gardevoir is mainly a special attack, and it's not like this skill can't do much damage, right? Meditation adds special attack to Loneliness, shouldn't it be AOE that teleports and then adds special attack?

I've finished reading it completely, and I have some thoughts. It's overall good. I have some thoughts on the plot, but there are two points. The first is that the male protagonist's feelings for the female protagonist are a bit unnatural. It feels like he is forcibly giving way to the character and explaining it forcefully. No matter what, the male protagonist is not allowed to have such thoughts. Sometimes he talks about world peace and so on. It's a bit tiring to read, either don't have a female protagonist, don't always have some good-looking girls, girls you like, but they are not allowed to be together, even ambiguity is not allowed, it is too boring to read, it completely reduces the impression of the book, if you don't do it, don't design these plots, the second is the battle. It's too weak, whether it's a battle between gods or ordinary elves, and it's too restrictive for the realm. Champion-level elves will definitely not be able to defeat the elves of the second-level gods. Moreover, forget it if they can't beat them. The second-level gods will either kill or destroy the champion-level Pokémon in an instant. This is really a bit counterintuitive. Oh my god, it's completely different from the original worldview. It doesn't make sense in either the animation or the game. That's about it. The idea of introducing the Rainbow Rockets at the end of the plot is actually quite good. If the God War is more exciting and the battles are detailed and dynamic, the whole book will be rated higher. Come on, author, I hope future books will be better!

It's really nice to look at, and it's really fun to feel good, but if you give away a mythical beast so casually, and suddenly someone appears and snatches it from a Pokémon, I'm really going to have a heart attack [Petrochemical]

The protagonist group story is not a male protagonist story. It may be different from other Pokémon stories. This is the first time for the author to write it. If you are not satisfied, please feel free to complain! There are rich past life settings. Don't think that just because the protagonist is a killer, he should be a villain.