I Became a Girl, and I Just Want to Be a Slacker!

If I still write like this, it will definitely become popular in the later stage. It is very beautiful, but the characteristics of the characters are not obvious enough and need to work hard.

Not bad, I finally found a book I like to read.

Change, the writing is excellent, the descriptions of women's bodies are in place, there are very few descriptions of female abortion, and the emotional descriptions are full. The growth of the heroine is very gratifying and cute. The relationship between the heroine and the second heroine is silky smooth, and the family relationship between the heroine and her mother is also touching. Everything written above is very good. The writing style improves later on, but unfortunately after the beginning of the academy chapter, the second female lead's appearances are much less, and they are basically mentioned in one stroke, and the posts are gone. The battle scenes are described very well, but the narrative technique of scene switching is a bit problematic and could be improved. The writing style is a bit humorous. In short, this book is worth reading. It integrates multiple worldviews, including the Western worldview of swords and magic, the Eastern cultivation system, future technological energy, etc. I blindly guessed that the heroine is a god, and she was rebuilt for unknown reasons. The little senior sister is the protector who knows everything. The script was also arranged by the original owner. Then the little senior sister must have special feelings for the heroine. It may also be a clone or love. If it is written, this book can break 500 chapters, tsk tsk. Worth collecting. Come on! Great author!

Very interesting, good luck to the author

This book is quite good, and the structure of the characters is quite detailed. However, the number of chapters may be too few, so it is not very popular.

This book is really beautiful! The characters are also well drawn! I guarantee my reading time! ! ! This will definitely become very popular in the future, keep up the hard work, author! ! Alas, the rating is too low

Why does this book have so many female protagonists~

Lily (happy), ship swollen (happy), pig's feet not able to climb (sad)

It's so beautiful. Come, come, come. There are too few people. The author has no motivation [crying][crying][crying][crying]

I know you are in a hurry, but don't be anxious yet.