Is It Really Reasonable for Senior Brother to Be This Weak?

Rounding it up, self-praise Two updates daily, one in the morning and one in the evening. Thank you for your understanding.

For a new author, this is quite good. It feels like something a seasoned reader of online novels would write, but the plot transitions and paragraph connections are a bit stiff. However, the writing style is quite concise, and the plot progression is decent. The recent chapters might have been a bit off-track; perhaps they should take some time to develop their ideas.

Speaking of romance, the pairing provided by the Heavenly Dao should be Senior Sister Su Yingzhou. However, as the story progressed, it evolved into a harem narrative. This can be understood as a deviation due to the male protagonist's various transmigratory actions and perceived "cultural pollution."

It's finished! It's finished! I really liked the Nine Heavens mission. Although the ending was a bit abrupt, it seems there's not much more to write to advance the storyline. However, the writing is indeed excellent. I hope the author will write some side stories! 😘😘😘

It's been a long time since I've read such a comfortable book. The ending felt like it was about to finish, but that's okay. Also, is "Nine Heavens" really a copy of my brother Lu's template? 🤔 Although they're not exactly the same, there are many similarities: Gou Shi-like ethereal spiritual roots, unreliable elders and masters, and the early game reliance on sneaky development, plus the incredibly harmonious sect atmosphere compared to other novels.

It's a great read, and I really like the protagonist's... Well, how should I put it? He's a true gentleman, not secretive or reserved—I mean, he's approachable. Many novels like to hide their close relationships, and I find that kind of formula a bit hard to stand. But I quite like this protagonist.

Considering this is the author's debut work, it's quite good for a novel to be written to this extent.

I finally finished reading it. Overall, it was pretty good. The characters and plot were quite good, but there were a few things that felt a bit strange. For example, the ending where half of the protagonist's primordial spirit was taken to the immortal realm gave me a weird feeling of "whoever is stronger is the original."

One more time, five stars, five stars. What I want to see most now is Kagamine Rin slowly falling for her. After all, the male lead is so strong and so eccentric; it's nice to slowly attract him, and then watch Kagamine Rin's stubborn and mischievous antics. To be honest.

I personally think it's well-written and a comfortable read. I hope there will be more updates.