Draw Near to the Light, Become the Light

It's not easy for an author to write a novel, so I gave it a four. ① There are countless typos in the characters' names. ②The plot progress bar is very fast, but the relationship progress bar is very slow. ③Gan Xiaoguo's character feels very similar to those two words to me. He said at least three times to stay away from Zhou Yunxun, but Zhou Yunxun gave him some kind of response, and Gan Xiaoguo immediately ignited hope. ④ Zhou Yunxun had implicitly rejected Gan Xiaoguo many times, but Zhou was still "accustomed" to bossing Gan Xiaoguo around, enjoying Gan Xiaoguo's efforts but rejecting Gan Xiaoguo's feelings for him. (Me: You 6) ⑤ Zhou Yunxun was much nicer to Gan Xiaoguo, but it felt like guilt to me. ⑥The time Zhou Yunxun was drunk, what he said was enough to defeat a boy who had liked him for a long time, and could even become a potential shadow. I don't understand why Gan Xiaoguo accepted Zhou Yunxun so quickly. [I know that Gan Xiaoguo has liked Zhou Yunxun for a long time, but the words he said are really hurtful and demeaning to a person who likes him. /I also know that he is drunk and impulsive [covers face]] I really feel that Gan Xiaoguo's behavior has gone beyond the scope of affection. But in reality, there are also people like Gan Xiaoguo, and some of them are in line with reality. (But in fact, if you really count Zhou Yunxun's behavior + language, it is enough to bow your head in reality.) (You say Zhou Yunxun is not suitable to be Gan Xiaoguo's light, but he promotes Gan Xiaoguo's future, but you say Zhou Yunxun is suitable, but he enjoys Gan Xiaoguo's dedication to him, rejects Gan Xiaoguo's feelings, and even goes so far as to say Gan Xiaoguo is disgusting) The author still has room for improvement. I hope the author will continue to work hard and create more perfect and excellent works.

@Zhou I love these three books written by you [love] [love] [love] This book is really real😄 It is recommended to read "A Flying Dragon" together. Both books are very real and the stories become more and more attractive🤩 There are very sweet and tear-jerking scenes. The most successful works are those that affect the emotional resonance of readers from deep inside. [Love] Come on, I have a feeling these three books will become popular together [Love]

Great, come on! The non-conventional setting and plot are great. Although there are some slight flaws in some places, the author's care and attention can be seen in the handling of some places. Looking forward to more masterpieces from the author.

Gan Xiaoguo's story tells me to stay away from straight men and to strengthen yourself first and love yourself [I'm about to cry]

I have read four novels by the author. Although the writing style of this one is very green, I can see that the author wrote it carefully. I was very moved after reading it. I hope the author will continue to write more excellent works. Come on [Admiration]

It is more realistic. Although there are quite a few typos and some descriptions are not delicate enough, it still touched me.

Close to reality, not so optimistic, not so pessimistic, the author vividly brings the images of the two people to life on the page.

Although... But... It's really... So little. I finished reading it in one day. Can you... Can you write more [I'm about to cry]

How can I say it? It's a bit sweet, but there are also a lot of regrets.

I have read your trilogy in five consecutive days. I hope that the author will give you a lot of support and wait for your next book [Adoration]