He's My Soft-Pack Abs

It's a very nice novel. Although the content is a bit borrowed, the author's writing is also very good. The description of body shape does not need to be so long, and too much description is a bit like trying to make up the word count. Come on, the author [blows a kiss]

First of all, I think the writing style and everything are good and very real. I feel very sorry for Xiao Xie, but there are some plots where I also want to scold him. But I also know that I just want to scold my former self. But when I saw Xiao Zhang in the middle, I couldn't stand it. Xiao Zhang was like a tool to promote their relationship. He was no different from the previous Xiao Xie. I felt very sorry for him. I don't know how to put it, but I was a little sad. Finally, I wish the author better and better. It's my own problem that I can't read it. I'm not saying that the writing and plot are not good, but I feel sorry for Xiao Zhang. ❤️❤️❤️

I think this article reveals a very typical situation: Guizi falls in love with a straight man The person in this article is indeed a straight man at the beginning, but many straight men are actually bi. This article is no exception, but many of them don't realize that there is only one sexual orientation in the world - the direction of the heart. If there is something about Xie that makes Wen's heart move, Wen will like him. But it takes time for straight men like Wei Bi to accept that they like boys and realize that they have developed a crush on that person. This period is very embarrassing and requires calmness on both sides. At this stage of this article, the author added a third person - Zhang Zhang made it clear that Xie Another contradiction is revealed: What should you do when two people fall in love with you? Choosing only one of them will inevitably hurt the other person's heart. It is unrealistic to have both, so let's see how the author writes it ❤️

The author's writing is very good. I have read so many novels of the same type. To be honest, the author's book is very good. The writing is very delicate. Everyone's feelings are very different. It can be seen that the author's true feelings are not fabricated out of thin air. I have not guessed the content of each chapter. The content is very novel. The emotional pull between the two protagonists is very heart-breaking. The concession of the third male lead in the end is really sharp🔪. I can read it. I feel bad for Zhang Xinwei, to be honest. I feel bad for Zhang Xinwei, but I can't love you. It's really just what Xie Mingyuan said. It's just that Wen Jingheng is better than him. I hope the author will write an extra chapter about Brother Xinwei. I really feel sorry for him. Finally, I wish the author a better and better book and a happier life. I am stupid and won't say anything. Maybe the author will not see my comments, but I still want to say, come on [air kiss] [air kiss] [air kiss]

I saw the shadow of Zhao Yuheng, but Zhao Yuheng and Wen Jingheng are two people. Although the plots are quite similar, they also have their own styles 🥰

Who wouldn't give this book a high rating? It's so well written. I suspect this is a spin-off of "Help, the hunky roommate begs to touch his abs." It's so good that it kills me. I won't allow anyone who hasn't read it. Sisters who see this, please raise the rating for me. Today I want to give the author a top rating. The author can rest assured. I love you and will always be with you @Crayon Mouse Mouse Come on, write well and try to get a second season. Brother Zhou's article was not even written for a second season. I was so angry that I wanted to spray him.

I have read more than 120 chapters so far The advantage of this book is that the secret love and pulling at the front are well written. The disadvantage is that the daily life of love after being together is too strange, the plot dialogue, and the character of the protagonist are completely unattractive. I feel like the author had a lot of fun writing the latter part, so he wrote whatever came to his mind. Recommend a book to the author "What kind of brother do you want to be? Can you be my partner?" If the writing style were more restrained, the plot more reasonable, and matched with the author's level of writing about secret love and pulling, I would definitely be able to write a better book

Member of my heart, I feel so happy 😘... Member of my heart, I feel so happy 😢... Member of my heart, I feel so happy [admiration]... I feel wronged, and I feel unhappy 🥺... Member of my heart, I feel happy [sending heartfelt wishes]

Oops, I have no resistance to this kind of writing. Come on, the author, please write sweeter. I am most afraid of knives ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Overall, it is well written. It is a pure sugar novel. The knife at the end is a bit stiff and the ending is a bit hasty. But in the end, it is HE and it is perfect. Except for the ending, the other plots are very good [Thoughts]