Reborn to Divorce My White-Moonlight Ex and Embrace the Eldest Daughter of a Great Clan

It must be five stars, otherwise no one will see this comment. It's really disgusting. I took it from a passage by the amazing Muto. There is a proliferation of articles on the Internet, and the most uncomfortable thing is a type of "turtle man's articles" that pretend to be "realistic" but actually have no character. For the so-called pleasure and conflict, the author wantonly tramples on the protagonist's dignity, treats concessions as forbearance, humility as deep affection, and packages bottomless compromises as maturity and stability, which makes people feel uncomfortable. In this kind of story, the protagonist is always enduring, giving in, and paralyzing himself. When your lover is looked down upon, you endure it; when your dignity is trampled on, you endure it; when your bottom line is repeatedly tested, you still endure it. It seems that as long as you are "soft" and "cowardly" enough, you can get a happy ending. But real life is never achieved by kneeling, true affection is not achieved by licking, and true strength is not achieved by unprincipled concessions. Treating cowardice as affection and humility as kindness is essentially a dwarfing of personality. A good work should convey integrity, responsibility, and what to do and what not to do, rather than teaching people to abandon their spine and self-esteem for so-called interests or feelings. Readers read the article to see growth, passion, and perseverance, not to see how a person loses his bottom line step by step and lives a life that he most despises. A story without character is boring no matter how twists and turns it is; a protagonist without dignity is cheap no matter how "fulfilling" it is. The real pleasure is never to compromise, but to stand tall and live magnanimously.

To be honest, the writing style is very good, the emotional line is really good, and it is very interesting to read. Although it is not disgusting, it makes me want to burst into tears. It is not impossible to write about a woman chasing a man in the crematorium, just like Zhou Qingyu. I think she will end up like Yue. I think a lot of people will applaud. After all, the male protagonist has not seen a woman he really wants to marry until now. , Whether you want a girl chasing a boy in the crematorium, or if there are more female protagonists, there are more female protagonists. Don't keep dilly-dallying, be more quick, and keep dragging it on. It's already 200 chapters. With such a small level of cultivation, it's not like you can't write about cultivating immortals and ascending to another world. It's the same as urban writing. You will only drive readers away. The subject matter is so good. If the author really wants to write it, it will definitely take a long time. This novel is very similar to a novel I've read called Women's New Black. The author ran away before finishing the 3000th chapter. It was so tortured, like you were force-fed a mouthful of shit that made you want to vomit. I hope you can finish it. If you write some cool articles, more people will reward you. @

It's in line with my taste, but it's too slow to accept the heroine. It would be better if there was more meat. Hehehe, please update more.

It is a really underrated novel. The male protagonist is not as cowardly as the comment section, nor can he be considered a strategist, but he is very shrewd, and the choices he makes are the best solutions for normal people. Moreover, the male protagonist has a very elegant character, which is my favorite character. The foreshadowing is also just right. The author's writing style is also very good, and the setting is also good. The shortcoming is the problem of combat power (probably also the reason for the low rating). The male protagonist's combat power is too strong. It's almost 100 chapters and the first level has not yet been reached. Everything around him has to be kept under wraps by his sister and maid. The second is that the emotional drama is actually written in general. It can be seen that the author wants to write a step-by-step relationship, but it still feels a bit inexplicable and indescribable when reading it. To sum up, 8.5 People think this book should be fine.

Good review! ! Urgent update! ! ! Sima Yue felt that he could arrange a wave of training to make up for the hero's line of helping him. It's a pity that it doesn't matter anymore.

The writing is quite good, and it is considered a very comprehensive book in Tomato, which at least makes it less painful to read. Now that I have read half of it, I personally feel that the only flaw is that Sima Yue's previous life was not explained clearly. Sima Yue's positioning should not reach the heroine, but the author spent so much ink on writing about Sima Yue's transformation, and even made a patch to say that Sima Yue only liked the male protagonist from the beginning to the end, and also laid foreshadowing, and even met the male protagonist naked. Then Sima Yue will definitely be accepted later, otherwise it will be missed. I think the author has avoided so many minefields, so he should not make such a mistake. Since Sima Yue wants to take over, and Sima Yue disappeared after the hero's family was ruined in the previous life, I think it would be better to explain clearly. On the one hand, I read that the male protagonist survived for a long time after the destruction of the Hou Mansion in his previous life. At that time, the male protagonist loved Sima Yue deeply. After Sima Yue disappeared, how could he not investigate where Sima Yue went? On the other hand, Sima Yue was nowhere to be seen. It was hard not to think that she was with Lu Chuan, which would make the past life shocking. This was also something I kept asking the author at the time. @ Of course, if this unknown whereabouts coincides with the foreshadowing laid earlier, that is, Sima Yue's extremely yin body, so that the plot will not have any surprises from the past life, I think it will work. Well, I will send some small gifts to support the author, and then I hope the author will reply. If the problem of Lei in the previous life can be solved, I will give the author a big gift.

I don't think it's a refreshing novel in the traditional sense, but based on my perception, I think the author's writing is very distinctive. Although his subject matter is not very new, some of the divisions of realms are still very good, and the writing style is not to mention. I think the perception is very good. It's a matter of opinion. I hope I can stick to it. For the depiction of emotional drama, both the rhythm and the narrative method are very good. If you want to be brainless, this is obviously not suitable, but if you want to develop it slowly, it is really recommended.

First of all, from a general point of view, it is undoubtedly a harem story. At the beginning, I thought it was a bad street. What is a bit flawed is Sima Yue's ridiculous feelings. He is reluctant to leave his wife after divorcing her, but it is normal. Her father does not love her, her mother does not love her, and her younger brother is disrespectful. The person she liked before is also cheating on her. , After seeing Wang Fu's face clearly, he deepened his feelings for the protagonist. However, after reading 200 chapters, he probably needs to clean up, but he doesn't make it too easy. Some people also talk about the issue of clones. The author said that there will be no green clones (although The yin and yang bodies share the same consciousness). The advantage of this article is that the characters are delicately portrayed, the emotional drama is rich, and the outline is quite obvious. The protagonist will treat the emotional entanglements and family members of the previous life with caution and change in this life, and improve his own strength to deal with the shadows and Wangshi (and Yuangui who may not die or will be resurrected). The disadvantage is that the plot is slow and sometimes a bit weak, but I can accept it. After all, I will not get tired of watching the emotional drama, and I can also experience the emotions and changes of each woman, enriching the character image. Reminder: It is unacceptable to accidentally enter the harem and the beginning of the plot (Sima Yue is Lu Shou Shen)! ! !

The plots of good novels are realistic and have a sense of combination of ancient people's thoughts and modern thoughts. They are not like those articles about systems and invincibles, where you can get whatever you want. Those articles are as unreal as sending you a sky ax to kill the gods and people you don't like. It is also not like those articles on immortality and those that only know about cultivation, which have no emotions and six desires and are not like human beings. Those articles are like working hard to get endless money. Right, after using force, you can directly become a monk from the palace. The disadvantage is that the plot progress is a bit slow. The second point is that you will not use the forces and subordinates behind the protagonist. Just like the evil cultivators have subordinates, each force should have its own deadpool team and protectors to protect the descendants. It does not require too high-level force. If you can fight to the death to protect the descendants of the powerful force and escape after encountering a fatal threat, it is enough. In ancient times, it was normal for people to have three wives and four concubines. It can't be too much. For example, the three obediences and four virtues should be downplayed but not eliminated. The author writes very well that everyone has his or her own character. It is good that both big and small figures, good guys and bad guys, have IQs. However, we must pay attention to the differences in hierarchy and thinking of each class. Don't bring modern ideas, everyone is equal, and equality between men and women to the ancient times. People like this will die miserably, and modern people can't do this. , Just like the emperors, ministers and forces of each dynasty, it would be strange for you to persuade others to marry only one person without being hacked to death. Also, in the early stage, it is good to consider the face of your own power and the other party's power by not divorcing the one directly. However, the length is a bit long. It is best to control it within 10 chapters. I hope that the plot in the middle period will be more compact and that the later period will not be unfinished and have a more satisfactory ending. Finally, more updates every day, more updates, don't stop updating, come on.

Objectively speaking, I thought it was a cool article at the beginning. Usually I read this kind of cool article for one night, and then won't read it again the next day, and have no memory points. But the more I read, the more surprised I am. It seems that the structure of the work at the beginning is not the same as the one who wrote the work. The author's literary skills are quite good, he is competent, and the article is also fascinating.