My Spirit Companion Simulator

It seems okay, but since it is a comprehensive element of the card, can it be made into a different style? For example, the dragon knight who made a contract with a female dragon in the West, the hero favored by the gods in the mythical world, the most powerful person with super powers in the apocalyptic world, and the panda who became a god in the animal world with martial arts. The world of omnics is constantly updating and iterating mechas.

It's not easy to write a book, so it's a five-star review. After demining, simulation + cards (or beast control is also acceptable) + fantasy novels. It's a good idea, but it just doesn't work. The two lines are too dramatic and can easily fall apart in the later stages. If you don't have high requirements for cool articles, you can read them.

The writing is very good without any poisonous points, and the ancient Chinese writing is also good, and the story connection is smooth. Overall, it is very good.

Not bad, just missing

It's okay, nothing poisonous

Yes, yes, using stories from childhood opened up new ideas. It can be said to be a "new story". Several previous stories were merged together to create a new one. Still very good. Come on, I think you can.

Everything was fine before, but after the hero saved the beauty, it started to get a bit toxic [face covering] One is the hero saving the beauty, and the other is where the promotion card is [laughing and crying]

I would like to give a suggestion to the author. It should be about three to five lines per paragraph. Otherwise, it will be full of words at a glance and it will be difficult to read. Also, for book friends who read novels at a glance, they cannot read it and can only read carefully. It will reduce their popularity [grievance] [grievance] [grievance] [grievance]

The book is okay, and the writing is pretty good. There are just some minor flaws, but I personally don't think they are a big problem (it's hard to say what the flaws are, because I don't think they are big problems, so I don't really care about them). But I think overall it's OK. You can give it a try [Chigua] Urgent update!

The literary talent is very good! The characters are well drawn! The protagonist's IQ and EQ are not high. If you have high requirements in this regard, you don't need to read it. If you read it, please don't post something about the protagonist's IQ and say he is stupid. He is an ordinary person and is not that high. There is no need to be too persistent! Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง