Gathering Broken Jade: May You Be Well, Elder Brother

Objective evaluation: Is it good for ancient Chinese texts to be rolled up according to this standard? Every sentence is full of poetry, and the writing style is really excellent. It can also be seen that the author has a profound cultural background. The advanced vocabulary makes me feel that this is not the quality of 🍅. Just looking at the text, I can imagine the Jiangnan water town, the snow light in the north, and the scenes of the Western Regions. There may be few people who read it, and the rating has not come up yet, but I believe that the treasures will always be dug out [Love] Subjective evaluation: Who doesn't love the cold and gentle male protagonist! Ah ah ah help me, this is the material for my dream tonight! [Adoration] There is a sense of proportion and thoughtfulness, and some twists and turns of emotions make the novel rich and interesting. The regret for me is probably Jin'an's hard work and persistence, and the prince's extra story. I also hope that the author's next novel will be more progressive, and there will be more extra stories. The child is so upset [crying]

The author's writing style is excellent [admiration][admiration], and the description of the girl's emotions is also delicate enough. The excitement and shyness of seeing the person you like is mixed with the dull pain in your heart caused by knowing that the other person will finally be a perfect match for her. It makes people have a kind of thought of "I knew this was so close to my heart, why did I know each other before". The character of the male protagonist is like a flower on the high mountain who was pulled down from the altar by the female protagonist. I also think the handling of the human fireworks is very good. It makes people feel that this man is slowly walking out of the book with the fragrance of bamboo. It is much better than the many books I have read before that wrote the male protagonist as a god who does not eat the fireworks of the world. But the handling of emotions in other places is a bit unsatisfactory. I think the change of feelings between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is still a bit abrupt. And I think it might be more natural to make the other characters more fleshed out and write about the impact of the love, hate and hatred of the little characters on the protagonist, so that the protagonist can understand his own emotions and the principles of doing things. However, I still like this book very much, and I look forward to the author writing better! I'm stupid, and I came up with this idea after reading the author's big book. If you don't like it, don't criticize it, it's offending. [Shy]

The author would like to give more support, I look forward to seeing the male protagonist be really good in the future! [Eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] I've been following it and I have to say that the author's views are really upright. The heroine feels that she does not want to break the world order in the novel, but Zundu is very angular and takes revenge when she can. Although there are not many golden fingers or anything like that, it actually suits her setting of traveling through books, because there are actually only so many words in a book. After reading it, it will not be of much help to her in ancient times. At most, she will know who is the good guy and who is the bad guy. Alas. As for male characters, Konyasu is actually quite good and loves to play straight. But I think his current liking for her is due to a feeling that the female protagonist is different from the women he has met, that kind of vague affection between the opposite sex. So I still choose the male protagonist because I think the male protagonist can actually give the female protagonist a sense of security, even though I hate him now for being a piece of wood! But it's understandable. After all, emotional changes also require a process [Cool] I've finished watching it, it's so beautiful [crying][crying][crying] I can't bear to leave it.

Wow! It's really beautiful! Very to my liking! I just like the coolness and self-control of the male protagonist, and I like Yazi who doesn't know it yet. I really like the jealous look, especially when the hero's mother asked him to help introduce the heroine to a partner. He was so angry that he started talking nonsense, and then immediately chased the heroine out to coax her. Zundu really likes this kind of plot. I have never been able to resist this kind of pseudo-brother-sister love! ! [Shy][shy][admiration][admiration]

It's so beautiful. The author's writing style is really amazing. Unlike other ancient romances, it doesn't have any ancient flavor at all. It doesn't make sense. This is really amazing.

The content of the book is very interesting. I would recommend it.

It's so beautiful, I don't know how to describe it. Every word, word, sentence and paragraph written by the author is written in my heart. Every character in the author's works has its own personality characteristics. Looking at this article, it seems that this is not a novel, but a real small world. Their joys, sorrows, sorrows and joys all affect my mood. Finally, I hope the author will continue to improve.

The author's writing style is really very good. Every word can create a good atmosphere. Although the plot of the story does not have many ups and downs, it makes people feel comfortable reading it as a whole. You will not have the idea of ​​abandoning the article. The author's writing style is really great [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

To be honest, the writing style is pretty good. For older readers, you can give it a try. The only minor flaw is the male protagonist's emotional process. Overall, it's pretty good! ! ! Very well written! I really like this kind of delicate writing style and non-protracted plot. Watch it!

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