Dragon Ball: The Scumbag Rote System

The fighting power of pork rib rice couldn't possibly be 400 million. Even Goku during the Cell Saga had a berth of 4 billion, yet he still couldn't defeat Pikkopf. He was only defeated in the end thanks to flaws in his techniques and the Super Kaioken. I hope you understand the plot before writing it 🤦

Do you really need a system to travel through Dragon Ball? If you travel to become Goku, train for a few years, and use the Dragon Balls to enhance your bloodline, your fighting power will skyrocket! Aren't the Dragon Balls themselves a system? The Namekian Dragon Balls would work too! You could wait until you have some fighting power before using them.

In Dragon Ball fanfiction, you're not number one. But in harem-style Dragon Ball fanfiction, I'd call you the strongest. 😏😏 Unbeatable. There are absolutely no flaws when it comes to collecting women. If I had to point out a weakness, it's that the power spikes are a little too fast. But it's a minor flaw and doesn't affect my five-star rating. 🤭🤭

It's great, I love reading it! Author, keep up the good work! I'll add more of my favorites to my collection, hehehe 😏😏😏😏😏😏🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

There are definitely a lot of problems to be found, but it's rare to see an author who has written so many books and is so prolific. It's quite impressive that they've managed to keep going. [Understood][Understood]

The plot, writing style, and content are all delicate and smooth, and very tightly paced. It's quite good, the kind of thing that's super interesting.

It's alright, not too bad, and the plot is quite innovative; you don't just follow the storyline blindly. I also hope the author can strengthen the main character more. Oh, and one more thing, your protagonist is really weak; his combat power increases incredibly slowly. 🤦

It's time to kidnap Bardos and take her home to be the Destroyer myself!

It's well-written; the low score might be due to some people constantly comparing it to the original work. Some might find it hard to accept, but after all, it's fan fiction and needs its own unique characteristics. Plus, it's free! It's a bit of a shame that the author appeared a little late on the 18th and couldn't join the Wukong fan club. I hope the author continues to work hard, maintains a good attitude, and creates even better works! Good luck! 👍

Looking forward to reading book reviews! 💕💕💕