After I Trained Them as Slaves, They All Wanted to Repay Me

Let me say, it's so good. The plot is good so far, the characters are well described, and the world setting is good. I also like the character of the male protagonist. It's just that it's too short! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Wouldn't this be very popular if it were adapted into a comic? There is no problem with the combat power and there is no collapse. To be honest, now that I have seen more than 290, I feel a little bit indifferent the more I look at it, because there are too many foreshadowings, and now I feel a little frustrated, and the author is too slow. I can only say that when writing these foreshadowings, the author should consider whether they can bury them as soon as possible, especially for the future male protagonist. You, the author, buried so many foreshadowings at the same time, and did not combine them with the characters. The plot at that time made the readers confused and a little frustrated. The main reason is that the protagonist's strength is really good. There are many fights that the protagonist does not take personally. Compared with those who have been trained, readers may pay more attention to the male protagonist. Nowadays, there are often many important characters who are not afraid of the protagonist's strength. Although this book is good, I still recommend some readers to read it for a while if they don't want to feel aggrieved. Because the author has buried foreshadowing, the subsequent plot will often not attract your attention as much as those foreshadowings. You can only wait for the author to continue to update and bury the foreshadowing, or wait for the author to finish the orc chapter before reading. Anyway, I have to give up for a while [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] I hope the author will not start high and go low

The rating of this book is really low. It is rare to see a work with such a clear outline on Tomato. The author also knows how to create all kinds of interesting points. It will not be like many books that use the gimmick of the introduction to attract people to read, and then the content in the introduction will be boring plot. The way the male protagonists get along with different female protagonists in each volume is also quite interesting. It won't make people feel the same after reading it. Some small expansions in the first two volumes are also well designed. The past in the first volume and the future in the second volume. In short, I think this book deserves a 9.5 On Tomato.

The amazing feeling is hard to get over for a long time The current situation in Tomato is a typical "kingdom prevails" so-called Shuangwen, which is also the hardest hit area in the other world. But let me explain the advantages of this book in detail: 1. The foreshadowing and the answer in the following article are very unexpected and can evoke my feelings as a reader. 2. Don't dwell too much on the character's image, but focus on the narrative. The series of plots before and after also makes the whole novel structurally complete. 3. Original plot style and unique chapter settings. This amazing feeling is hard to get over for a long time To sum up: the writing is complete, the plot is original, the narrative is reasonable, and the language is both elegant and popular. Dear author, I hope you can continue to create such high-quality works. As a reader, facing this kind of book, I give five stars~

After reading it, I can say that it is very interesting. Why does this online article smell like a light novel? Also, I feel that the plot of traveling through history can actually be changed. According to the author's writing, if it has changed a little in the long river of history, the parties involved in the history will definitely know it, and it may be a bit inconvenient to write. In fact, the author could refer to the fairy planting manual and just help the heroine modify this tragic ending in her consciousness. To achieve redemption, not to change history. But I have to say that the author's writing is very good. Even with a lot of Tomato defense, it can be regarded as a small stream of fresh air. Come on, keep it up. Come on, author [like][like][like] It looks good, but why has the author disappeared again? Don't stop updating, I really love this book. There are really very few tomatoes of this style nowadays. I quite like this style, so I told the author not to cut it [almost crying]

I have to say that this is a good book. I just discovered it tonight. I thought I would stop reading it after 1-2 hours, but I found that the content of this book was very attractive to me. I finished reading the updated plot (Elves) in one go. The story background of the book is very good. It is about the knight system in ancient Western times, and it also adds elements such as multiple races and systems. Although it is a system novel, it is not like other System Invincible novels which make people feel stale at the end. This slow development makes people thought-provoking. In terms of plot, it's okay. According to the current plot (elf chapter) and then (the princess chapter), the plots before and after are incoherent according to the updated novel. This also increases the reason why the novel can be written. There may be many different chapters in the follow-up. I am very looking forward to whether the final chapter will have a perfect ending [top post].

It's a very good book. The rating is a bit low. I especially like Wendy. At the beginning, it may be that the author was inexperienced, which led to unsatisfactory characterization. But it got better later on. If it doesn't fall apart in the middle and later stages, the results should be very good. Great support to the author.

Dangdang, evaluate it. As a novice writer, it is very good. The pacing is well controlled and the characterization is okay. At least the protagonist has characteristics. I can imagine what the main character looks like. It looks cool with a hint of warmth. But looking forward to the main plot, what is the secret of the protagonist's ability? Is the protagonist really a businessman later on? What is the connection between the protagonist and the current chaotic world situation? How were those particular slaves found, and what was the secret to their abilities? All in all, it's worth watching and can be lightly recommended. My evaluation is good, you can read it. The main line is somewhat quiet at the moment. Kudos to the author, I will try my best to recommend it.

The writing is very good, but the last dozen or so chapters have been a bit rushed. I don't know whether it's due to the arrangement of the plot or the urgent processing of the outline. For readers, if they have calmed down and experienced the world built by the author. Suddenly the author moves from close to moving, and the brainless atmosphere in the article suddenly appears. Especially after the elf rescue, the protagonist's elegance is no longer seen. The protagonist who is calm and calm in trouble suddenly becomes, okay, okay, get it, a middle-aged social beast with no problems. I don't have any capital at all, so I can only work overtime if my boss says I'm owed wages, so I'm a social beast with arrears of wages. I don't know why the author suddenly became eager. The writing is very good and the plot is full of excitement. It's a pity that the author couldn't hold on. The novel is the same as the novel. You and the eagle must make a compromise. The author's style of writing and the flow of the novel are the same. The final climax of the slow-burning novel is when it explodes. Just like Lelouch who died in the finale, the work was pushed from ordinary to the throne. The author's writing style is very good, and the book looks beautiful. He is a good eagle, but it is a pity that he fell asleep before he could get through it. His writing style changed, and his elegance and personality were gone. The book is still the same book, but the road up the mountain is broken. Personal bias, it's my fault if I'm wrong, please cheers for the author.

I have read more than ninety chapters so far. In the era of Shuangwen, The style of this book is a breath of fresh air, and it is well grasped. The writing style is very good, there is no poisonous point, all the characters are well created, and the foreshadowing is well laid out, making people want to know what happens next. As long as you keep it cool, it's a magical book

It can be said that it is a novel delayed by the title. Unlike other novels, the protagonist of the novel chooses a high-spirited young man as the protagonist. The protagonist of this film, Brett, has a mature temperament like an uncle. He does not change his face when a mountain collapses in front of him, which gives the other protagonists in the story a full sense of security. Although he is not Long Aotian, the look and feel is several times better than Long Aotian.