Quick Transmigration: I Am the Laplace Demon

The writing is very good and the plot is very novel. The settings of the several worlds I have seen so far are all good, but in each world there is always a feeling that I can't swallow it in one breath. It feels good but not bitter after eating it, like adding a dish that I don't like to eat into a good dish. . . .

The overall feeling is good. The author's writing is very good, and he has checked the information. He is very serious, but the plot is not mature enough. It feels like he wants to write a kind of dual strength but not too strong. It wants to be logical. It is a bit reluctant. It should be influenced by other Tomato articles. It has a slightly uneven feeling, like the third world. It is a bit forced to abuse the text. It seems to make sense, but when it comes to details, it feels forced and it is very difficult to read. Jiner, I feel like we have to fall into the mud together. Although I still fucked, I always feel uncomfortable and a bit mixed. I have read a lot of Tomato's fast-travel articles. I have read all kinds of them, and I have seen both good and bad. This book has great potential, but I hope the author will not be affected by other articles. It will be good if it is not crazy. I wish the author a lot more and more books to become more and more popular. Come on, author [Love] [Love] [Love]

The protagonist's tone is very high, and he is a high-IQ character, but the character design starts to fall apart from the first world. I don't know why the protagonist has to act as a character in a small world, and the process of chasing Chu Yao really feels like an ancient novel. To sum up, the protagonist's character design is contradictory and the initial world setting is too high.

The subject matter is very novel and the author is also quite educated. It's not just a mindless sweet novel. But in the first world, the male protagonist took Xiao Baihua's script. I felt a little bit... Then it gave me the feeling that Yue only liked Yao who saved him, not Chu Yao. And in terms of settings, it felt that the main god's clone in the world was affected by the original script (the most intuitive one is the character). I really can't understand the first world. In order to see Yue's attitude and not resist the original owner's "younger brother" Let it (hold arms?) (I forgot, I'm a little disgusted anyway) and take the script of an innocent little white flower [face covering] Overall, it's okay. It's not just a mindless sweet story, but I really feel that the love in the small world doesn't give people a very good feeling. Well, from my personal experience, I still recommend reading it. The prologue is still very good, but it's a little bit poisonous [facepalm]

It's beautiful, it really touched my heart, but it's a pity that there are so few of them [eating melon]

This book can be said to be the one that has been on my bookshelf for the longest time and the most frequently read. The others either looked at it and abandoned it, or they were read with great interest one day and became boring the next. But! ! Madam, how do you keep me interested in reading? ! ! The characterizations of the two people are very good and do not deviate from the characters. The ambiguous pull between them is also full of sexual tension! ! This is what I like! ! ! Yue Yue's temptation and Yao's willingness to sink are so exciting to watch! ! ! Look good, look good, look good! ! ! (Another: Don't stop, don't stop, don't stop, please, madam, I must write it down!!)

The setting feels very novel. I haven't seen a book with such logic and connotation in a long time. How to say it? Yue, one of the protagonists of this book, was betrayed in the original world and subjected to human experimentation. As a result, he gained great power. Let's call it probability. The author in the article has the ability to explain this probability in more detail. You can carefully check the information to see it. What next? Another protagonist also met in this world, which can be called mutual salvation. Yue's character in this book is a crazy beauty. Because she has been experimented on human bodies, she has a very high IQ, and her modified brain has been developed to 68%, surpassing all computers in the world. Every action he takes is step by step. What is the point that strikes me the most? Something happened. Because he had been modified by the human body, he lost human emotions, but he still retained his principles. When telling the prologue, he left a livelihood for the mercenaries to obtain information of great significance to mankind. He did not want to destroy the world because he had been hurt. He said: "The fate of mankind is ultimately in his own hands." Indeed, if these mercenaries are really like "The Mist" (the protagonist's world has a huge monster that they are running away from) The monster was chasing him, but the car ran out of gas. In extreme despair, he and his family decided to commit suicide. After he killed his family, he got out of the car and found that the monster had been knocked down by the army. Like the protagonist in the story, who escapes fear when he is in despair and wants to commit suicide. , Then human beings are not far from extinction. There is also the first world. The little star fails to seduce the protagonist and is wanted by his sponsor. Anyway, he is doing some bad things. On the surface, Yue insulted the little star, but in fact he wanted to leave a way for the little star to live.

It's pretty and refreshing, and Small World isn't particularly long (because it was too long for me to write about a world I've read so fast that I feel like I can guess the plot later) In my opinion, the main character, Shou, is the one who crazily criticizes great beauties. I really love her. On the contrary, it is another protagonist now. Because he is a small world with a different personality, I am now very curious about how he captured the heart of my crazy criticizing the great beauty Yue [please update], the author will write quickly, don't force me Kneel down and beg you [crying]

Objective evaluation: The writing is very good, of course, it does have a bit of a yandere feel, especially the ABO part. It really writes that kind of twisted (I don't know how to describe) Yue's setting really poked me. Because of what happened when I was a child, I think Yue's behavior is taken for granted. That's the feeling. Objective evaluation, as for Yao, hiss, there is a bit of that in the ABO. Overall, it is a very good article. The above is just my personal experience Hmm... It's still a personal comment. The following article feels that Yao's personal image has not been well-shaped. Yue's image is still maintained, and the emotional line is a bit crooked... For example, Yao recognized Yue as the snow mountain god, and felt that Yao did not love Yue, but the pattern, which is a bit. The above is a personal evaluation I wish you all a happy reading [currently in progress]

Super beautiful, stunned, such a charming young couple. The author's writing style is very good. The entanglement between the two people, especially Yue, is such a full and three-dimensional character. I like him so much. He is so good at writing and moved me. I watch it again and again. As an emperor in the world of abo, he is really worthy of being the dream lover of the whole country. It is really It's so beautiful, so attractive, who doesn't love it, screaming, especially the speech to the people, it's so moving 🥺, it's very well written, but it's so unreadable, I can't bear to read it, hehe, the little couple is so sweet, keep up the good work, ahhh, look forward to more updates, [love][love][love][love][love]