Quick Transmigration: Looking for a Wife? I'll Keep That in Mind

(Only personal feelings, discussion content) If the author does not accept comments, you can delete the post @ me, with a calm tone and no accusation or similar emotions. I have read about 40 chapters of the first Small World so far. There are no big surprises. As well as a few pictures of the third world (this is the key point), I feel that the plot line is a bit loose and the main line is not clear (except for the original protagonist and the enemy who are not clear). The development of the love line is slow, probably because of the setting. There is obvious progress around Chapter 40. It's a good story about scumbag abuse, but it doesn't involve killing people with a borrowed knife, but there's a little bit of foreshadowing in front of it. The rhythm of the first small world is not very good. 1. The article is slow and detailed, so read with caution if you like to read quickly. 2. It is not a love at first sight article. Those who like delicate emotional development can read it. 3. Gong is a bit delicate but strong in front of Shou. 4. I feel alienated from the protagonist Gong, maybe because he really has no inner feelings. Narrator, the alienation here means that Gong is like a fairy but not an ordinary person, has the heart of a gentleman, has no particularly intense emotions, is plain and smooth. Tenderness stands out, and generally speaking, it doesn't feel like a human being (this seems a bit unpleasant🤦) (personal feelings) Since these are some words of praise for the author: In order to write a big life line, it is still very fine, very delicate, and very warm. It can clearly highlight the attack, and is very soft and moist. It is not easy to write a novel, but the author is great (as far as I know, the author's second book), and he can persist in writing it. The author is very cute, and so are the characters. The rhythm of the third world is obviously better. I hope the author can write better and better, and keep up the good work. Of course, the prerequisite is to pay attention to your body.

I was the first person in my village to read novels on Tomato, and they heard that I read a lot of novels. The whole village was shocked. The village chief came to my house and told my dad that I was crazy! My partner divorced me and told me that I couldn't survive this life! Faced with a lot of pressure, I insisted on reading it! Finally, the novel continued to be updated... I opened a chapter of the novel with excitement and a trembling heart, and I felt like my eyes were going to be blinded at that moment... Such looks, feel, and quality! It's only because I don't read enough. There are no gorgeous words to describe it. As soon as I proudly stood at the entrance of the village to ask for it, the villagers were stunned and time froze for a moment. Everyone stared at each package motionlessly. Just like the green eyes of a wolf at night, they glowed horribly! 15 Seconds later the whole village was boiling. It's so good! It's so beautiful! It's so worth it! Some people screamed desperately and jumped into the well if they didn't show it to them. I was so scared that I quickly put away my treasure and ran away. It's so beautiful!!!!!! Ahhhhhhhh!!!!!

I don't want to say anything more, just a five-star review. It's really super sweet! Generally speaking, novels are either sweet with a bit of sadism, or sadistic first and then sweet, or sweet first and then sadistic. It's rare to see such sweet novels! I just don't know if it will be cruel later [sending my heart]

It's so pretty🥺Men are menstruating🙄Women are crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It's the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘Yes God is my rose, it illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful😊I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮It makes me realize that God does exist, I am so cute that I cry From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression 😋 is the alarm clock for vegetative people 😨 So cute that tears flow out of the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River 😈 So beautiful 🥰 God is my rose, it lights up my dark life and makes my world meaningful 😙 I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor 😎 It makes me realize that God does exist, I am so good that my tears will not stop, and from now on, the world will no longer be short of water.

It's very interesting and has no flaws, except that the first small world is a bit long, but the writing is very good and makes people want to read on. I hope you will do better [please update] It's too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good

It's super pretty. Plot: Very good-looking, not sadistic at all, not aggrieved at all, resolved very quickly. Emotions: fast-paced but not lacking in delicacy. Very good-looking | Su Ling × Feng Xu Shuangjie dotes on each other, the two strong men go in both directions, they express their love loudly, and it is super good-looking.

It's very beautiful. The relationship between Su Ling and Feng Xu is very beautiful. I look forward to the next development of the plot. I hope the author will be more careful and don't give up.

From my point of view, the plot is extremely delicious and not procrastinating. The young couple are also very happy and interact very cutely [Blow kiss] This cross-book novel is not an ordinary cross-book novel. I think Xiao Su is also a badass haha ​​🤭 In short, there are no shortcomings. I highly recommend it ~ It is not easy to find such high-quality novels on Tomato 🤭 🤭 🤭

I feel like the writing of the third small world is getting better and better. Lingling is really a gentle, gentle, loving, aggrieved and coquettish little fox. She especially likes to tease Xiaoxu. Xiaoxu is a bit arrogant. Let's call it mutual love. In terms of love, Lingling has always been the guide. I hope that in the future, we can see Xiaoxu's enlightenment faster and more proactively, and the setting of the small world will be more novel and more interesting to watch.

It's a very sweet book. When I read the first small world, I thought it was a bit too long. The fast-traveling novels I read before were all fast-paced, but when I read the second small world, it was much better. The characters are super engaging. Although the third small world has not been completed yet, overall, it can only be described in one word: cute! I really like reading cute books. I hope the author will update [Bird Food Master] 😳 as soon as possible.