Aotu World: The Golden Dawn

I just drank water in the dormitory and smelled a burnt smell, but the hot water kettle was not turned on. Could it be that the circuit was burned? I removed all the wires, thinking it was a wire problem. I was still thinking about calling the dormitory manager, but I suddenly realized that it was my heart that was burning for you [[shy][shy][shy]

It's really beautiful. I don't understand why the score is so low? The character design is basically not broken, the plot is complete and there are no loopholes. My suspicion is that internal employees of Qichuangshe could write it. I usually don't write book reviews because I'm lazy. But this is really beautiful, the author should write more! ! (ง •̀_•́)ง

It's great, but I'm a little bit upset. I really love the heroine. I kind of want to compete with Garder Rose for the heroine [admiration] [making faces]

It's pretty good, um, actually I prefer the one without CP, but the introduction has already mentioned that the male protagonist is Garder Rose, and I can't say five stars or five stars. It's just a pity. The author can try it without CP. This book you wrote is really great. If it were written without CP, I feel that many people will like it. The heroine is a trainee angel. Don't change this. Well, author, I actually hope you will write it!

Friel never forces himself on others. "Dawn always appears last, it is both the beginning and the end."

The author's writing is particularly good [blowing kiss], but the ending is a bit sadistic. At the beginning of the story, the girl feels confused about her appearance. After her memory disappears, she meets the lover she can trust for life. She makes close friends, encounters difficulties and dangers, and has happy memories. At the end, the companions go their separate ways and start their own lives, but their gods are forgotten (to be honest, I really can't bear it). I want to cry when the God of Creation is forgotten😭) In fact, I really want to see a side story where the author meets his companions again and starts a new story (I really want to see Kelly and the protagonist together. How is Kelly's mental state at the end? I always feel a little out of sorts and keep sleeping, so I think of deep sleep) (It's just a personal thought, don't criticize!!!) I hope the author starts a new story. I'm looking forward to it.

The ending was so sad when I saw it, but it was very interesting.

I love it so much that I have nothing to say. This is the only one of all the embossed articles I have read that is both sweet and complete. I hope the author will publish more books like this👉🏻👈🏻

Amy and An Mixiu probably have a hard time getting over my feelings, so they just need to wait a little longer...

It's really beautiful! ! ! I burst into tears at the final ending of the concave and convex competition😭There are so many regrets💔This ending may be a relief for everyone, but I just feel so sad T_T. This is a regret that will remain and my life will be full. Our little ones are not full yet. Secondly, the author's writing style is very good, and there are some sentences in it that can be used as writing materials for compositions. Finally, the author, please marry me [love][love][love]♡(*´∀｀*)person(*´∀｀*)♡