Arknights: The Adorable Angel Is Actually Cunning

The concept is quite good, but I don't know why it seems a bit inexplicable. The protagonist's early character development has been quite successful so far. In addition, the number of words is relatively small and it's a bit rushed. I suggest you focus on it first. Anyway, keep up the good work.

I'm amazed at the author's control of time. Although less than a day and a half has passed so far, he has already written nearly 70,000 to 80,000 words. I feel that the author is suitable for writing a time-limited copy game, so that he can give full play to his work.

Ahem, no one is, right? I am a dog from Texas [Adoration] [Sending Hearts]

To be honest, I was a little confused when I read it earlier. I don't know if anyone is like me. The more I read, the more curious I am about the protagonist's life experience. If you say that he is just an ordinary employee, I still don't believe it. Although there is an explanation for the reason, the author did not explain it. I was curious and it took me two times to sort out one thing. I probably won't go into details here and let's see how the author fills in the holes later. In addition, this is a very nice book. The protagonist is very interesting and the setting is good. I would also like to ask, when is the timeline? Will the daily life in the introduction be affected by the main line or abandon the main line and make up a route of my own? Ah, I said too much

Ten out of ten or even nine out of ten is better

This book is for daily Arknights fans, thank you all for your support.

Why is it only 7.2? Do you know how to score it on Tomato? It should obviously be 10 or even 9.9. One of the most comfortable Ark fanfics I have ever read. The Dragon Gate chapter has a good grasp of the rhythm of the daily life and the main plot. It is not as good as Super Long Aotian (probably?), And the original work is praised. It can be seen that it is very serious when divided into volumes. It is just that the (real) heroine has been living in the dialogue for so long () It's a bit too miserable (). Also, when will Xiao Mo appear? Chef Mo was so angry that he backed out of the plot because my director took the lead. Some suggestions are that the dialogue between the characters looks a bit messy. It took a few people at Penguin Logistics a while to recognize who is who. I feel that it would be better to put two paragraphs said by one person in a pair of double quotation marks.

In one day, I finished reading the current updates. The timeline is before saving the doctor, changing gender, and posting like crazy (I like it). The character creation is very good, the protagonist is very strong, both civil and military, and currently the protagonist has just become an employee of Rhode Island

I never thought that you actually wrote the diary of working in Teyvat.

Very good, good luck to the author