Little Brother, Why Do You Look at Me Like That?

It's really good-looking. Anyway, the male protagonist is not a yandere, so it feels a bit juvenile. Ah, the female protagonist is not too yandere either. I really like the characters of the male and female protagonist. The protagonist is not a yandere, but you write the supporting character as a yandere, right? The heroine is also quite powerful, not like someone who can be bullied, and there are a lot of CPs in the book, which are worth reading, even in the serialization [crying] [crying with laughter] [puckering]

Very pretty, I like it. I really like the character design of the male and female protagonists. Oops, I just like to watch sweet love. I hope the author can make the two of them fall in love sweetly for a longer time [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

In terms of character design, I really like the senior sister and junior brother. The characters of several protagonists are quite full, but I don't particularly like the line between Xuan Mu and Tang Xinxin. For me, this line has some flaws, but not too much. Personally, I feel that Xuan Mu, as the behind-the-scenes boss, has too little writing. It would be much better to connect his past and connect with Tang's emotions. And in terms of plot, the story line is relatively complete, although I think a lot of it was cut off in the second half because of poor data. I can understand it. I personally suggest that the line between Zhongzhi and Yue Ling (called Yue Ling, right? I have a bad memory, I forgot) is quite interesting. It should be quite interesting to intersperse their emotional experiences. Cai, adding five or six chapters together will make the images of these two people more vivid, and Zhongzhi is basically a background board in the article. Yue Ling personally feels that this character will be very colorful and popular if she is fleshed out, but because there is too little writing, what she does and her emotional expression make me feel a bit disconnected. Oh, yes, another point is that I think a few transitions are a bit too abrupt. It feels like there is still plot that can be added, but because the author did not write an outline or had no inspiration, the transitions are a bit abrupt, but overall it is good. Personal opinions do not represent absolute opinions. Just take a look at what is useful and don't take it personally. I look forward to better works.

2023.10.10.1：34 Finished reading! Throw flowers! This is the first time I have seen this form of time travel. It is very novel and I also like the setting of the heroine and the hero, but the system is terrible. Although the Lord God confessed everything to Wen Ning later, I really cannot forgive the deletion of people's memories! Then, I don't understand their relationship line a bit. I spent the early part of the book writing about what the female protagonist does and what the male protagonist only occasionally participates in. Why can't the two of them kiss just because of an accident and the male protagonist likes the female protagonist? There is also the emotional line between Run Xin and Tian Ji. I really want to see it. Why not write it? There are also Chi Jing and Yao Xia, I think they will have a follow-up. Then there are Xu Mi and Shi Wan who I am also very frustrated with! And Xuan Mu and Tang Xinxin, should they write another extra story? I haven't written it yet. He's resurrected. I actually like Xuanmu better than the male protagonist. He said threatening words, but he didn't actually hurt her at all. Apart from biting her mouth open, everything else was fine! Probably because no one has taught him what love is since he was a child, that's why he treats the people he likes like that, but the way he talks and doesn't mean what he means is really cute.

There are no cliches, and the protagonists all have happy endings. But I want to know why the villain did all the bad things from beginning to end [thinking], and why there was a good ending in the end. On the contrary, if Senior Sister Shi, who was very kind and had a good personality, died, I thought you, the author, would also give Senior Sister Shi a way to resurrect her (but without [anger][anger]). In the end, it was the protagonists and the supporting characters who achieved He, and the NPCs were not given a way to survive at all (ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhft off a good ending for us senior sister Shi and I still blame the CP of senior sister Shi and senior brother Xu [crying] [crying] [crying]') But the author's writing is generally very good, and the next part can be improved [exploration]

To be honest, the article is generally good. But why is the extra episode so short? There are some pitfalls that seem to have been filled in but not filled in yet. The article was written a bit too fast. I think it can be slower. ——March 3, 2024

It's good to read, I just like this feeling. I read it in one day. This is the second book I found in Tomato that I like [crying][crying][crying] It looks good and feels great [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]

The young master of the Demonic Clan was never revealed at first. I guessed the character and even doubted the male protagonist. But then I got such a big twist and he was the only character I didn't guess.

It's okay, the two protagonists are okay, but the second male character Xuan Mu is from the demon clan, killed their senior sister Shi and so on, and is still alive and well in the end, and still with Tang Xinxin, this is something I can't understand.

I like this article very much. There are no tricks. The person the heroine likes is the villain, the son of the Demon Lord, but a junior fellow student. Also, in the end, the Demon Lord fell in love with another junior sister. Although this junior sister sealed him, they still got together in the end. It's beautiful.