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Overall, it's good, except that Demon Slayer was written too hastily and casually in the end. Regardless of whether you were affected by it in the future, if you want to speed up the progress, you must have foreshadowing and rendering. It is not a rush. A good book is not about how fresh the content is, but the foreshadowing of the writing and the rendering of the book's meaning, which makes it a masterpiece. Author, you are actually good at writing. The logic of the method is good, and the overall logic is not unclear or disconnected, but it gives people a sudden feeling as the plot progresses. Only by foreshadowing and plot rendering can you give the book your unique style, otherwise the style will become less and less. Think about it more, maybe the author is a student or working, and updates are really slow, so be sure to take care of this! Maybe it's too long-winded, so let's keep it this way, I'm optimistic about you.

It's ok to look good and like the protagonist's personality. If you don't want the heroine to have markings, the author will take care of it. Please do your best to update it. [Laughs]

Okay, okay, I, Uchiha Madara, would like to call you the strongest tomato. I was careless. I was disappointed after writing Naruto and I kept doing mating dolls. I forced offline and then restarted. There are many ways to write comprehensive comics. I didn't want to write an invincible flow, but I suppressed my strength and wrote an invincible flow.

It's very good, but the volume is a bit small. I finished reading it in a while [crying] [crying] I hope there won't be a heroine. After all, it's time to travel through the heavens. Please [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm crying]

Steady and down-to-earth plot arrangement, each world gradually advances. The protagonist is not a wasteland, but he is not afraid of death either. Neither a prisoner nor a stallion. Very good. The reversal is not much, which is a shortcoming. But, it's good enough to make people want to watch it. Generally speaking, it is not top-notch, but it is a very reliable ration among online articles.

It's very beautiful, I hope there won't be a female protagonist, and Tachibana can continue to be pure, keep on the path of the sword, and don't mix in too weird abilities

Come on, it's best to have a sweet heroine, you can live without one, don't give her away

I like it very much! Come on, author! Why is no one watching? [Crying] It's so hard to find someone who has no cp and doesn't cheat on me! Why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching Look, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why No one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why Why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching, why no one is watching (／_＼)

This book starts with Demon Slayer, followed by Pirates, Naruto, Bleach, One Punch, and Dragon Balls. The first two chapters are the best to watch. They are really exciting and very addictive. After Naruto, it's not as good as before, but I can still read it. I follow it every day. For example, I can't stand some books in the later stages. Now I'm on Dragon Ball. I haven't read Dragon Ball and I can't understand it. I can't read it on Dragon Ball. This book is a comprehensive comic, one by one. You see, there are not many connections between the chapters. It's like reading several books. The new chapter is like reading a new book. It doesn't feel like reading a eunuch book. I just can't stand it anymore. It's a new chapter that I haven't read yet. I just treat it as finished and leave a better ending in my heart. Thanks to the author, goodbye

A comprehensive comic novel with no problems. If you like anime, you can probably watch it. The author responds very actively to readers' questions and is very particular about researching information. It can be seen that he writes carefully. But whether the protagonist is single or has a heroine, the author is very unclear. In the first PS, he said he was single, but later he made it ambiguous. (I don't know why, maybe there are manuscripts saved.) To be honest, this kind of novel either has a harem or has no heroine. Unless you carry it with you all the time, wearing it around will greatly affect your perception of the heroine. From the looks of it, I personally feel that the setting is a bit like Luo Qing's "The Summoner of Miracles". Each world is a new life. There is no system and all you have to do is rely on your own efforts and talent to become stronger in each anime world. But that book has a main line. The author's book is relatively scattered, and the main line is not clear yet. By the way, how many words does the author plan to finish this book? I'm quite curious. After all, there is no main plot for the time being. I don't know how many worlds there will be if I continue on.

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I have finished chasing the Demon Slayer arc and the Pirates arc. The ending of the Pirates arc is a bit rushed, but fortunately I am not stuck here. After all, the original work has not ended yet, and it is time to cut the knot quickly. Come on, author, there are 4 updates every day, it's not enough to read.

It does not blindly pursue the original work. The plot of Hei Shi Mou's rebellion is quite bright. The male protagonist also has a positive outlook on life and does not become unscrupulous for the sake of power.

Brother, it's okay. The writing is very good. The article is compact, but you can try another style next time or create your own style. You are already great. Come on, the writing is very good. You can publish a book next time. You can publish it in your own style. I hope you can bring out the values ​​​​of your own world and not borrow the theme of Demon Slayer.

After reading the first 60 chapters, the writing is quite good and the author is very imaginative. The plot is unconventional, especially the pore breathing technique, which is really unconventional. Although there are some flaws, such as the perfunctory and superficial description of other supporting characters, which shows that the author's skills are not deep enough, but overall, the flaws are not concealed, and it is indeed worthy of 5 stars. If there is no collapse later, it should be able to reach 9.5 Points

It's good-looking and looks better the more you look at it. Are there any drawbacks? Of course there is, but in terms of imagination, I really like the author's setting. The plot is also very attractive. It's a pity that I haven't watched the anime about the world after Naruto. I probably have to "watch it in one sitting" to refresh my understanding of the combat power and ability plot. It's really, really beautiful! ! ! Strongly recommend you to go see it! Maybe it's also because it's my first time watching this type of movie and I have a different feeling. You can make up your own mind, anyway, I gave you five stars [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] There are only two points I want to make. [The battle power is ambiguous, rising and falling] [The world is scrawled at the end] Some plots could be written in detail, but the author gives the impression that it ends in a sloppy way. In fact, the explanation should be given, but it cannot be said to be perfect. I think the best thing written is the world of One Piece. I feel like there is still a lot that can be written about the world of Naruto. There is also the issue of the protagonist's combat power. There is always a feeling that the protagonist's combat power is at the ceiling when he comes into this world, but sometimes the protagonist is described as weak in certain aspects and needs to be worked on in the early stages. I don't understand or understand how the author calculates the combat power. Sometimes I want to be stubborn but I will be very high-profile later on. Sometimes my writing seems to be very powerful, but sometimes it seems that I am not as good as some people. Things started going wrong ever since Naruto started. The world of Death is even more unpredictable. On the one hand, it makes the protagonist's soul very miserable, and on the other hand, it is better than others. So the combat power really gives me a vague feeling. Maybe it's because I can't understand it. Putting aside the issue of combat power, I hope the author will take more care of his work next time he writes in the same genre. The ending can be written better and not be too sloppy, like the world of One Piece. The score will definitely be higher than now.

It's very good, I like to watch it, [laughs evilly]. If the protagonist in the later stage is always one person or one or two people, it will be more in line with my expectations. So, author, please take out your manuscript and I will help you revise it [laughter]

The writing is okay, but First, I didn't know until later that the protagonist was Japanese Second, the protagonist's golden finger was actually created by Shenlong from the Japanese comic Dragon Ball. It's amazing. There is an indescribable feeling of being fucked

I have bought three. The quality is very good and consistent with the seller's description. The children especially like to eat it and fall asleep after eating it. The pattern is also very good. The fabric is comfortable and the size is standard. The white color of the non-stick cup wine is more white. It is also very smooth after washing. The hair is not oily anymore. The screen is clear and runs smoothly. It is stress-free for sensitive skin. The grip is comfortable and does not hurt the gums. I add a few more drops every time I cook. It is almost as comfortable as a real person. I am very satisfied with this purchase. Highly recommended

The writing is quite good, logical, and some belong to the invincible style and add some plots. The author should say this at the beginning, it's great to be at this level, However, the author prefers to accept readers' opinions. This is a good thing, but it is not entirely a good thing. At least from my point of view, writing is the author's imagination space. The outline should be determined before writing, and there should be specific branches of the plot. Such a route will be deleted or added because some readers find it boring. It is not worth the gain. Everyone has different preferences. You can't take care of all readers. Just write what you think is the best work. Even if you don't have many achievements at the beginning, it is a rare experience to treat it as an accumulation. . Come on

Yes, it has its own mature system. I think I should add some medical skills. With the arrangement of the technological world, I can also add some mechanical learning. After all, Soul Penetration has more side-by-side skills.

Good fanfic, the plot is not muddled and worth reading.

Come on, it's good. In fact, except for those first works, other novels are too homogenized, but there is no way to do it. Because human beings are nothing more than essence and spirit, and their bodies are nothing more than internal organs, skin, flesh, tendons, blood, and bones. No matter what they are called in the setting, these are the only things that can be cultivated. What we see is actually the author's imagination and story-telling level. This book still has some imagination, and he also has his own understanding and ideas about the original work. Although some deviations from the author's settings, as long as the logic is consistent, this will be an advantage [laughing]

Well, this book gave me a very novel feeling. I have read many Infinite Flow novels, but in the end it was just boring and infinite superposition of combat power. But this novel solves this problem very well. There is no system, it is all about soul penetration. No matter how good the foundation is, it is all from scratch. It really makes me happy. It is not mindless. It is a pity that there is no harem and no original main plot.

The writing is good, and the novel is well written. However, each chapter is too short, which affects the reading experience. You can combine the two chapters into one before publishing.

Although the writing style is still a bit immature, the creativity and concept of the story are very interesting. It has a feeling of the Tomato writing style of the time. I personally like it very much and recommend it to friends who are in a book shortage.

Five-star praise has been given. The next step is to update day and night, come on, author, hehe. [Sneaky smile] [Sneaky smile] I doubt the author would deceive me, a weak, pitiful and helpless reader. 😜😜😜😜

A rare novel that is not brainless and semi-invincible, recommended If you like Demon Slayer and Pirates, come watch it. It's really too short, I suggest you keep updating it in the dark room [laughter]

I have finished watching "Demon Slayer" and can't wait to rate it. Maybe I will review it later, but now it's really impressive. As a fan, it feels very good. It fully meets my expectations for the type of quick wear.

This book is indeed very well written! It is not only rich in content and rigorous in structure, but also has beautiful and fascinating language. It's such a joy to read that it makes you want to keep reading. Whether it is used as study materials or leisure reading, it is highly recommended!