Anime Crossover: My Everyday Life with the Shiina Sisters

It's nice to watch, but I wish it could have more of the male protagonist's skills. I feel that the male protagonist is good at looks and housework, but only a little bit in other aspects.

Mahiru's personality is completely different. She doesn't have the feeling of a perfect wife who is considerate and caring. The writing is a bit contrived. The author is completely reshaping a person according to his own ideas. The protagonist was originally Kaguya's dog licker, and the protagonist came to become Mahiru's dog licker. At least you have to write an equal feeling. After reading dozens of chapters, the protagonist will follow Mahiru. You are running behind the scenes, and you don't understand why you should write novels and draw comics. You are the only son and heir of a top-notch family. Even if you want to start your own industry, you have to spend some money to build a company, come up with a few ideas and let others write them and directly turn them into industries. Why draw comics by yourself, and you will be exhausted and sick all over? Do you think many of those authors are in good health, or are they just trying to make enough money to get the three melons and two dates that their families randomly give them?

First up is Mahiru yyds! Secondly, it would be good if the protagonist doesn't act like a licking dog for system tasks. Then, there are a lot of sweet scenes in daily life. Finally, I would like to give you some suggestions. I hope that the protagonist will not suddenly be dominated by his lower body and have a relationship with a passerby heroine who has appeared in a few photos. (To be honest, I watch a lot of variety comics. In the first few hundred chapters of daily life, the relationship with the heroine is fine, and the sweetness reaches the kiss stage at most. Later, the protagonist suddenly has a relationship with a passerby heroine whom he has met a few times or only has a good impression of a friend. Although it is a harem story, this is not a bad point, but it is still very disappointing) The protagonist obviously wants to change the image of the original owner for Mahiru, but it's really bad to change the target after being flirted with. It feels like doing so is worse than the original owner. It's not like the memory of Kami-sama disappears after clearing the game. It's like playing a dungeon. Daily harem literature is about mutual understanding between people in the social circle of life and needs to be developed on multiple lines. The reason why some readers say that the protagonist licked her is because the protagonist does not need to be overly enthusiastic about the new passerby heroine. (It is understandable if you want to do this for system rewards, but as you said before, it depends on your mood when doing system tasks.) Start with familiar faces and develop normally. People can help when they are in trouble, but at least they must be at the level of friends, and there must be a certain amount of favors. When you see a beautiful strange girl, you help her for free just to gain a good impression? Maybe people don't necessarily appreciate it. With the protagonist's identity and background, there is no need to seduce any beautiful girl. It is more in line with the actual situation to agree on the price under the premise of helping. Apart from Mahiru, it would be great to develop like Hakumo. Wouldn't it be nice to go both ways? There is also a girl like Ying Lili, who can be friends with people like the original owner. Why not develop her favorability first and leave it later? It is understandable that the protagonist's attitude towards Mahiru is a bit humble at first. After all, the original owner was at fault first, and the protagonist has just traveled through time and does not understand the real situation and only wants to make compensation. In addition, the protagonist's love for Mahiru is based on the premise of an unmarried couple, so Mahiu will not be disgusted but will get points. But it is different for others to love her. Doing so when the favorability of others is not enough will appear to be low in emotional intelligence and may even cause a loss of favorability. As a time-traveler who has participated in work, he should not make this mistake.

How should I put it? When you wrote it, you didn't notice that the protagonist was licking too much, and you wanted her to forgive him for doing things to please her. They were already engaged. Anyway, what was going to happen sooner or later was brought forward. The female protagonist felt that the male protagonist was trying to please him, and she kept showing off to him. I felt very speechless when I watched it. The male protagonist is originally a wealthy heir and needs status and status. He should have everything he wants, so when he sleeps with the female protagonist, he has to please her and make her forgive him. The female protagonist also turned her face away, which made me feel so uncomfortable. I couldn't even use my brain to watch it, let alone use my brain to watch it. It was so frustrating.

It's very beautiful. Can the heroine be less beautiful? Come on 😘

Finally I know why the score is low. The setting of the male protagonist and the setting style of the plot are all the same as those of female videos more than ten years ago. The male protagonist is both classic and upright. He not only enjoys the benefits brought by his predecessor, but also blames his drunkenness on his predecessor. The storyline is boring and monotonous, and the character's personality is hypocritical and contrived.

The plot is too broken. There are too many heroines in the anime. Except for Shiina and Momoko, you can even delete all the other heroines without affecting the writing [face covering] It's obvious that Mai-senpai is about to disappear, but the protagonist doesn't feel any tension at all, and the teacher disappears in the forest before he can deal with it [face covering] There is no good main line throughout the story, and the system does not play any motivating role. Like many previous female protagonists, deleting it will not affect it at all. This is not how the system is used as a cheat [face covering] It's really not fun at all. I've always wanted to see Shinomiya Kaguya chasing her husband at the crematorium, but it didn't happen at all [face covering] [face covering] The three elements of the novel, characters, plot and environment, are completely inadequate [face covering] After all, he is a new author. I hope the author will think carefully about how to deal with the story conflict in the web novel next time [face covering]

Give yourself a shallow praise 💕

I think it's average. The main character doesn't fit his character and his actions don't match his background. He's a wealthy young man and he's like a loser. There's a lot of content about how to please girls by being cunning, which is a bit long-winded. There are also things like writing light novels, comics, songs, etc. It is said that it is to improve one's reputation, which is even more funny. Even if you are top-notch, in the eyes of the chaebol, you are not doing your job properly and are embarrassing. If we really want to improve, it would be better if traditional writers win the Akutagawa Prize and have a high social status, and are admired by the Japanese people. Other kyudo, kendo, and shogi. What kind of light novels and comics would it be funny if your chaebol eldest son really went to his own end? Also, the main character was written a little too bad. Most of the heroines here are ordinary people without the filter halo. If the protagonist doesn't use any tricks, the heroines will go around you. After all, the status is not equal and there is a lot of pressure. I have read the variety show Chaebol Young Master written by another author. If you fall in love with the heroine, you can directly go to the girl's home and place wedding invitations. It is normal for all the girls to be fiancées.

Personally, I feel invincible at the beginning...