In the Cultivation World, Don't Talk to Strangers

It is a system-type invincible harem novel. The protagonist replicates the realm and upgrades. The fairy's beauty attracts the attention. The double cultivation and double promotion enhance the harem. The plot is smooth, the thinking is clear, the speech is not wordy, the fighting is not ink, the characters are vivid and interesting, but it is a bit short, and the ending is too hasty. If you like harem novels, it can be recommended. There are 18 Taoist couples, Nan Li, Sikong Yan, Luo Yunshuang, Tian Luan, Jiang Ruoxi, Beimian Wenlan, Chu Ruoqian, Jiang Ling'er, Nan Yun, Lin Muwan, Bai Luojin, Baili Yao, Nangong Liuli, Su Qianqian, Bai Qingqing, Zhan Xing'er, Xiaocai, Long Chuyun.

It's great. I like novels with multiple heroines. Reality cannot be changed. Everything can be found in dreams.

I've finished reading it. It's very well written. It's a very novel subject matter. I've collected what I need to collect. There's no ink, but the emotional line is a bit blurry. I fell in love with the protagonist too quickly. In this case, the novel may not be too long, otherwise there will be too many female protagonists in the later stages. There is also the rebirth of Ye Fan. He himself said that the body of Xuanyin was his in the previous life. This point is a bit estranged and a bit discouraging. You can add a dialogue with the protagonist's system where you discovered Ye Fan's reincarnation before. It does not necessarily require rebirth, and let the system tell the protagonist that it is the memory added by Heaven to the son of destiny, but Ye Fan does not know that he only knows that it is rebirth, so it will not affect the subsequent plot. There are relatively few meetings to persuade you to quit, you can refer to them for reference.

After watching this for too long, the villain feels suddenly relaxed, particularly relaxed, and his mood is sublimated. There are basically no poisonous points. As for the hidden realm segments that other book lovers feel uncomfortable with, it is just a transition in a few chapters. You will not be able to stop reading it. Pretty good.

I definitely give it full marks. There is no doubt that it is a very good book. However, there are some flaws that I hope the author can correct when he writes the book in the future. The last few dozen chapters made me a little dazzled. I felt that the writing was a bit rushed. It may also be my own problem. I knew that it was almost the end. The reading was also very eager, which made me dazzled. There are too many women to count. But this is also a starting point for the rhythm of this book. I think there is nothing wrong with it. It would be better if the writing technique could be more powerful. I don't know why the author only wrote less than two hundred chapters. This book can definitely continue to be written. I have about thirty chapters left to finish it. I don't know if there will be a sequel. I want to see the fairy world and the world after that.

I have read half of the book, the relationship between the male protagonist's Taoist couple: Taoist couple Nanli, Sikong Yan, Luo Yunshuang, Tianluan, Jiang Ruoxi, Beimian Wenlan, Chu Ruoqian, Jiang Ling'er, Nan Yun, Lin Muwan, Bai Luojin, Baili Yao, and Nangong Liuli. But the overall story is not boring, fast-paced, not wordy, and quite in line with the refreshing setting. Give five stars

Come on! The writing is good, but the reason why the woman is too proactive is not enough, and it feels a bit deliberate. But it looks good.

It's quite interesting to practice daily life of cultivating immortals + invincibility + harem [smile] [smile]

It's very interesting and innovative, please support the author.

This harem novel is comfortable to read. That kind of Shura field, where the harem is divided into two main and one harem, is not that satisfying. It only makes me feel that the male protagonist is incompetent and cannot suppress the harem. Also, harem stories have to be divided into main characters and minor ones, does it seem like your love is unequal? This novel is handled very well and is relaxing to read.