One Piece: My Guide to Raising a Loli

Some places are not ideal, but cultivating little lolita is worthy of praise! But I hope Kuina's small flaws won't appear. Instead of forcing Kuina to follow the ship by herself, the protagonist just ran away without saying a word and completely forgot to save Kuina!

The writing at the beginning is quite good, but it is a bit sloppy when I start to speed up the chapters later, and the ending is a bit inexplicable. Maybe the author is confused about the follow-up ideas. If you can, I look forward to the author writing a new book.

This book has the appearance of an emperor! I'm sick...

The subject matter is okay! Isn't it called the All Things Cultivation System? They are all still children now, so they should be able to cultivate anything, at least spiritually.

Come on, I hope it won't be interrupted or unfinished. [Laughing][shy]

Very nice, good luck to the author [Like]

In fact, you can write in detail how Momonosuke died.

The writing is good, but the wolf is really unhappy with him. It's okay to see Momonosuke in One Piece, but I don't want to read fan fiction with Momonosuke.

Very good, keep up the good work

This is really a lolita control.

So damn pretty [laughs]

It's okay. As a daily novel, it's pretty good. It has a little bit of combat adjustment, and the ambiguity is kept to the point where I don't know if it will lead to a harem.

This wolf is not dead yet

Pretty good, pretty

Well written, keep up the good work

The idea is good, but suddenly I have an appendix,

It's okay, but the ending is a bit sloppy

Lolicon is the strongest, but it's a pity that the protagonist is not punished

If you don't give me five stars, this book will be gone.

It's well written and I recommend it to you.