Calamity Walks Through Hogwarts

It's very well written, it's just a pity there's a female lead [I understand].

Having finished reading (currently at chapter 57, the Goblet of Fire storyline is nearing its end), here's a general review: The protagonist is a wizard from ancient times who is invincible in the present era (at chapter 57 so far). The female lead is Hermione. The writing is excellent, the protagonist has a mature personality, and there are no clichéd plot points.

This is wonderful, so wonderful! It's been months since I last read such a good book. I hope the author can maintain this level of writing style. It's so much more enjoyable to read than some of those mediocre novels.

The plot was good, and the romance was sweet. I originally wrote a 600-word review criticizing the war with death (mainly complaining about how poor the main characters' strategy was, getting their base raided by Death), but then I decided to delete it. I hope the author will cut the angst and add more sweetness, fewer riddles, and more straightforward plot. We're getting old, so we just love sweet moments 😘

It's good overall, but the main character is a bit cowardly, the plot lacks imagination and feels somewhat outdated, the relationship between the main character and supporting characters isn't handled well, I don't particularly like the romantic subplots between the main characters, and the main character isn't decisive enough. The first few chapters weren't very engaging.

The plot is really good, I love it! 😅😅 But why is the female lead Hermione and not Luna? I don't mean to discriminate against Hermione, I'm just a little tired of reading Hermione-led stories. While I don't have a big problem with Hermione, I still prefer Luna. If possible, I hope the author will make Luna the female lead in future Harry Potter stories! Please! 🥺🥺 This is just a small request from a small fan of the author. 😄😘👍❤️ A little bit awkward though 😅😅😅

I hope the author doesn't stop updating. The theme of this book is very novel and quite different from typical fan fiction, but it's very good. It's a single female lead, but unfortunately, the female lead is Hermione 🤦

This book can only be described as a masterpiece of Harry Potter fan fiction. The plot flows smoothly, largely deviating from the original storyline, yet it still adheres to the Harry Potter universe's worldview and timeline. I hope it will be completed soon. Keep it up!

It can be perfectly cool, but there's a tiny problem. You've already entered the fray, and Death has entered too. It doesn't necessarily have to follow the original plot development; that would be too deliberate. But if you're going to change it, you need to control the scale and depict a more plausible magical world.

My biggest takeaway from reading up to Chapter 11 of Volume 2 is that the author could have easily avoided using the HP IP. Only a small portion of the story is actually related to HP. Of course, this doesn't preclude it from being a great novel.