Winning the World Championship and Repelling 100,000 Void Creatures

Three points are for stains. If you write stains, write them well. It is normal to use the system to make up for your regrets. However, what you wrote is too outrageous. It has become a fantasy. You can also add buffs to your teammates before the game. Brother Sha and Brother Fei have become Chinese directly. They are still in the EDG youth training. This is outrageous.

The subject matter is good, but the writing is shit

There is no bottom line about the word count and some nonsense, and it's still embarrassing

If you can't write it, don't write it. Whose game doesn't include any details of the game? Do you write in vernacular? One chapter a day? It's difficult to give birth.

The writing is good, but it's a bit watery, and the author is too lazy to write well. 666666, Direct fantasy, Geneva

Come on come on!

It's outrageous, it's especially outrageous. JDG becomes RNG, RNG becomes JDG, it's a combination of the two.

There is a lot of nonsense, I am convinced by you, there is so much nonsense [laughing awkwardly] [laughing awkwardly] [laughing] [what]

The idea is good, but can you stop being so watery? It's only been a few chapters and you're already crazy about this. What the hell is the last chapter? It's a whole piece of nonsense literature.

The sentiment is very good, but the writing is so rubbish