Winning the World Championship and Repelling 100,000 Void Creatures

The three points are for Wuzi. If you're going to write about Wuzi, then write it properly. It's normal to use the system to make up for regrets, but what you wrote is too outrageous. It's become fantasy. You can even give your teammates buffs before the game. Shai Ge and Fei Ge have become Chinese, and they're from EDG's youth training program. It's really outrageous.

Good subject matter, but the writing is garbage.

It's just endless padding with words and rambling on about nothing, and it's all forced and awkward.

If you can't write it, then don't write it. What competition doesn't include any details about the competition? Are you trying to write in plain language? One chapter a day? That's going to be a difficult birth.

It's well-written, but a bit padded, and the author is too lazy; it's a terrible piece of writing. 666666, straight out of fantasy, Geneva

Keep it up!

It's outrageous, absolutely outrageous. They kept switching between JDG and RNG, it's like they merged two teams.

You've rambled on and on, I'm speechless! So much nonsense! 😅😅🤭 [What?]

The idea is good, but can you please stop with this filler? It's only a few chapters and you're already rambling on like crazy. What was that last chapter anyway? It was a whole piece of rambling nonsense!

The sentiment is good, but the writing is terrible.