Naruto: A Journey That Begins with the Star Village Ninjas

It looks good; I hope you keep it up.

It's watchable, but the setting has problems. The Peacock Technique requires a star to activate chakra before it can be used. My guess is that it's a fragment of the Ten-Tails. First, after activation, the chakra's color will become the same as the purple dragon that the Ten-Tails stole chakra from (normally it's blue).

It's alright. By the way, author, I remember that the Lightning Ninja had a subordinate named Tsukuyomi who were researching ninja beasts on an island. That could be a setting. The story takes place on Naruto's journey after saving Konoha. Guy was captured by a huge eagle, and they went to that island, which has probably been abandoned for a long time.

It's interesting, keep it up!

I'm currently on chapter 92. So far, there aren't any major flaws; it's decent, and not a typical studio-produced assembly-line story. So, I'm giving it five stars for now. Generally, when I read ten books, I'd give seven one-star reviews, and only three good ones.

Sure, hurry up and write it. Can't the protagonist be powerful and kill indiscriminately? Some people are really sycophantic. They think the protagonist in a comic book is amazing, but can't the protagonist in this book be invincible? That's hilarious! (Yes, I'm talking about the person downstairs.)

I just finished reading chapter 53, and it's really well written. Finally, I've found a novel that doesn't focus on life in Konoha. The protagonist has been developing his strength cautiously since the beginning and is now attacking the Land of Fire. He's not being reckless at all, and the story is progressing steadily!

It's good, but I just wanted to ask how often it updates? I've saved it for so many days already. Keep up the good work, author! Author, keep up the good work! It's so short, it's frustrating. This is my second follow-up review. Good job, author, but the word count is just too low 🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦 It's September 22nd now, author, how many chapters do you owe me?

666, I'll give you a thumbs up just for taking down Tsunade and Jiraiya without hesitation.

It's very well written. I personally think this book was maliciously downgraded. I hope the author won't persist; gold will always shine.