Naruto: A Journey That Begins with the Star Village Ninjas

Looks good, I hope you stick with it.

If you can see it, there is something wrong with the setting. The Peacock Magic Technique requires a star to activate the chakra before it can be used. It is guessed that it is a fragment of the ten tails. First, after the chakra is activated, the color will become the same color as the purple dragon that the ten tails captured the chakra (normally blue). Second, the activation is similar to turning chakra into a tailed beast. Third, the activated chakra can absorb the chakra that has also been activated by the star. (If you are more imaginative, you can even capture the chakra of the tailed beast?) The protagonist at the beginning is an elite jounin. The development of the star is rubbish (even the setting is not clear). The peacock magic method is not understood (the secret technique requires a requirement to be practiced. The protagonist simply ignores this requirement). After using a ninjutsu similar to the Thunder Kirin, the shadow is broken. There is no Minazuki clan, only the snow clan (very loud). The plot is a bit like what I am thinking and a bit cloudy. Generally speaking, the author's setting is very clear. It is a Taeda war novel.

Okay, let me mention the author. I remember that there are moon ninjas under the thunder ninja. They are studying ninja beasts on an island. They can make arrangements there. The plot is on the way Naruto saved the Leaf Village.

It feels interesting. Come on.

I have now read ninety-two chapters. For the time being, there are not too many poisonous points. It is quite satisfactory and it is not a traditional studio production line, so I will give it five points for the time being. Normally, I read ten books on Tomato, and seven of them will be rated one star by me, and the remaining three are good reviews. If these three books are more, assuming that six of the ten books are well received, I may change the rating to two to three stars. For the time being, there is no big problem with this book, so you can read it with confidence. If it is toxic in the future, I will follow up and change the review. Well, that's it.

Okay, write it quickly. Can't the protagonist be strong enough to kill indiscriminately? Some people really lick. They are the protagonists in the comics and are very powerful. Can't the protagonist of this book be invincible? It's so funny! (Yes, I'm talking about the one downstairs.)

I finished reading Chapter 53 at the beginning. It was really well written. I finally read a novel that doesn't deal with life in Konoha. The protagonist started to develop from a shabby character to the current attack on the Land of Fire. There is no waste at all and steady progress!

It's good, I just want to ask how many days it will be updated? I have been saving this for how many days. Come on, work hard, author. The author worked hard, but it's so short that it's so short. This is the second follow-up review. It's good, author, but the number of words is too few [cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face] It's September 22nd. How many chapters do you owe me, author?

666, I'll give you a thumbs up for killing Tsunade and Jiraiya without hesitation.

It is very well written. I personally feel that this book should have been divided due to malicious intent. I hope the author will not insist on it. Gold will always shine.