Solar Empire: Starting on a Wasteland Planet

Perfect! It's getting better and better, and the more you look at it, the better it looks.

Still very good

It looks very good so far and has great potential. The world view is grand and there is a lot to write about. The opening scene is a blast, directly portraying the protagonist's dignified and domineering smiling tiger character, and establishing the planet lord's character. The plot is compact, and the protagonist-level popular NPC is conquered at the beginning, and the changes in the psychological journey of the subordinates are described in detail, which is very refreshing. So far, the writing is smooth, without obvious poisonous points, and can be read in one breath. The image of the protagonist and leader is well created, and the temperament of an aloof king is portrayed, which is very special. Quote description: "You are one and ten thousand. You are an instant and eternity. You are the creator and the ruler. You will surely let your way walk on the earth as if you are walking in your country."

How to say it? The plot is pretty good so far, and it doesn't have any bad points. The most weird thing is the writing technique. It's very weird. I can't explain how it feels. It just looks weird [something].

This book is very good so far, I hope the author will continue it

Not enough, not enough at all

Yes, as long as there is no supervision,

In fact, this book is quite good. As for the low score, I guess it is because some people gave it a high score before reading it for a long time, which caused Tomato to think that it was polishing the data and forcibly lowered the score. I really like this book. It has the content of interstellar war that I particularly like, and it also intersperses the plot of becoming an NPC in the game. I hope the author will not care about the rating, continue writing, and don't end the book in a hurry.

Okay, it's you again, this book has given me a lot of surprises [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

There is no description of the protagonist's life in the first 17 years (when the memory of the time traveler has not awakened, you can use a few sentences to summarize how he lived for 17 years. If you will describe it later, treat it as if I didn't say it). There is a lot of nonsense, such as what I have already written in the previous chapter, and I will write it again in the next chapter... Overall, it is very good, but the whole book gave me a sense of It's a strange feeling. I feel like the author can make what the protagonist wants to do more obvious. For example, what is the purpose of the protagonist's journey to become stronger? There must be a point to lead to it. Even if it is to become stronger for the sake of becoming stronger, it is fine. However, this book seems not to have written why to become stronger. If it has been written, please remind me and I will change the comment 😳