The Path to Immortality Begins as an Outer Sect Disciple

The protagonist gives people the feeling that I know I have a cheat and I am the protagonist, so I am very confident.

The rhythm is very strange. There seems to be no main line. Every event is passively accepted. There is no subjective initiative of the protagonist at all. For example, Mingguang, did you think you could hide it at first? Then put it in Mingguangyuan, sell it to others to get the resources, or simply throw it away. There is nothing, and the protagonist has no action at all. The cultivation environment is so good, it's just an immortal weapon. If there are plug-ins, are you afraid that there won't be any in the future? He deliberately creates conflicts.

The background is pretty good, but it's too depressing. I've been waiting for it to feel better but it didn't make me [crazy] [crazy]. Good things are so worthless in other people's hands. If you keep them yourself, you can either keep them at the bottom of the box or give them away to save your life. It is estimated that the author has never thought of keeping it. The functions of various good things are unknown and there is no detailed introduction. He just keeps emphasizing how high-end it is, and then says that the current level is too low to keep it at the bottom of the box [what] [what]. One more thing. At present, it seems that the subsequent conflicts are all caused by the fairy weapon, but since the fairy weapon is so small, how dare Zi Mansion, an inner sect in front, dare to make plans. The bosses seemed to look down on it, sitting tight on the Diaoyutai, and the protagonist was missed after getting it. The writing was too contradictory, and it felt like it was forcibly creating conflicts to push the plot, but it was not exciting, and it was really difficult to watch. [Smile][smile] One more thing, this background is really good, the world view is huge, and there are too many things that can be integrated, but I feel that the author cannot grasp it, and no Taoist friends have published a similar book [Chigua][Chigua]

I originally thought it was good to read, but what Mingguang said after I handed it over to the master made me feel that this book was not suitable for me to read. I like to see the type who works hard and has few troubles. He develops silently and is unwavering. He is so high-profile and trouble-making. He clearly knows that there is a cheat in hand. As long as he takes it step by step, he will reach the top. Why take so many risks? What does it have to do with whether other people are happy or not, like it or not? They are all passers-by who are bound to be surpassed. Why go to all that trouble? Is it really fun to fight with others?

Emmmm, I haven't read such a frustrating book in a long time. If you keep suppressing it, there won't be any Tomato people to see it. If you read it for two days, you can only discard it, or you can send it to a certain point [smile] Everyone comes to Tomato to have a good time.

My evaluation is that the protagonist moans for nothing, pretends to be arrogant, and is nothing.

At present, the world view of the novel is very huge. I just don't understand why the author wants the protagonist of the novel to expose his fairy spirit. Personally, I think that if the protagonist hides his immortal energy, nothing unnecessary will happen. Anyway, I think this is it. Bug it.

The protagonist is somewhat confident that he is the protagonist and has no ability to walk around.

The protagonist's golden finger is useless and annoying to watch.

I don't know what the main plot is. Although my cultivation is low, I still have to participate in various major events.