A Master of Chinese Martial Arts, Practicing Immortality Through Science

It feels relatively fresh, unconventional, friendly and natural. At first glance, it feels a bit watery and the pace is not fast. But gradually I feel that it looks more real, immersive and comfortable. Come on, author,

The writing is good, and the writing style of the article is very good. As an old bookworm, I have one thing to say. According to the traditional customs of cultivating immortals, one cannot have spiritual consciousness before building the foundation, let alone release it, because Qi training monks can only open the lower Dantian, and the upper Dantian can only be opened after building the foundation. It is also called Zifudang, except for those with extraordinary talents.

I feel like the plot is good. It's still developing into a cultivating family. It has past life memories and a corresponding lifestyle. It's very good. There are no ambiguous adjectives in the description of women, and there is no harem for the time being. I personally feel good about it, like it👍 I have read almost 300 chapters, and the first part is very satisfying. As soon as he entered the sect, he not only flirted with women, but also found some modern words such as "soldier" and "company commander", which still felt strange. And he always stands out, loves to show off, and everyone revolves around the protagonist. Personally, I think the gap is a bit big. I'm a little disappointed, I can't stand it anymore, so I quit, I'm sorry.

This novel is very well written, and the author's skills are also very good. I just want to relax while reading the novel, but to read a novel, you have to be humane and sophisticated. Although I think it should be like this, if I were the protagonist, I would try my best to be like this, but I am the reader, not the protagonist, so I feel a little uncomfortable and uncomfortable reading it! Even so, I still give it five stars, hoping that the author can go one step further between refreshing and rational.

Let me say a few words after seeing this. The overall writing style is good, witty and humorous, with occasional tension, and some small knowledge points combined with reality are also small highlights. What I have given so far is ten grains, which are edible. However, the overall writing is a bit "stuck" and feels frustrating. The explanations during practice are average, but the process of advanced training lacks a sense of urgency. There is no wave-by-wave advancement, which makes people eager to read the next chapter. For example, if you look at some stories that travel through fictional history, when the protagonist goes out to fight, you can't just write about the war. You should also combine the preparation of materials, strategic layout, conspiracy, the opponent's reaction, and finally the exciting battlefield battle. This is a wave of compactness. Anyway, it's just my personal suggestion. I hope the author will write better and better in the future. First give me five stars for support. Also, can anyone answer my question? After all, who stipulated that the duel of cultivators involves throwing skills from a distance? This setting? ? ? As soon as the main character is mentioned in the book, the comments are in trouble. From the earlier journey to Piaomiao, Zhu Xian and others also had close combat. Not to mention our traditional apotheosis of gods, Journey to the West, Erlangshen and the Great Sage all have to be physically sanctified. Heavenly soldiers and generals also come down to earth with weapons to "suppress bandits" The master master invited by the Four-Eyed God also hit a zombie with a hammer, so why did he have to lose his functions? ? ? Some comments said that Xiu Zhen's fighting involves losing abilities from a distance. Wouldn't that make me laugh to death? ? ? The duel of cultivators is a 360-degree indiscriminate attack on the spirit and terrain. In fact, the later stages of Dragon Ball are more consistent, except that there is no spiritual attack.

The writing is up to standard, the ideas are novel, the plot is reasonable, and the pace is not sluggish. There is almost no word count, but there is just a little too much explanation. What I like most about this book is that all the pitfalls are filled in, and the protagonist leaves no regrets. Only the origin of a mysterious light group at the end is not revealed, and it is agreed to be revealed in the next book. It is quite good.

It's a pretty good novel, but there's nothing special about it.

It's well written. It's the best novel I've read recently. The author keeps it up. It's great. A little suggestion, but give the protagonist some setbacks appropriately. If it is written smoothly all the time, it will be a bit dull. For specific content, please refer to Mortal Cultivation of Immortality. The protagonist has so many talents and treasures, but he does not crush them randomly when fighting against his peers. Those who cultivate to become immortals will always have their merits. Also, since you have written Taoist couples, you cannot write Taoist couples as backgrounds, allowing them to participate in the plot at the right time, or to follow the protagonist's footsteps by chance. As an old reader, sometimes I don't actually hate Taoist couples, but as a man, and the most important other half in life is a dispensable person. It makes me uncomfortable to think about it. The above are some small suggestions. I hope the author will write better and better. I give you a thumbs up👍🏻!

After reading it, the score is as I thought, 8.8, 8 Is passing, 9 is excellent, and 9.5 Is a masterpiece! If I had read this book ten years ago, I would have scored 9.2! Now I can only score 8.8 Points! Good work too! The work as a whole has no flaws and nothing particularly fascinating. It is a straightforward narrative! The designed Chinese martial arts fighting style is pretty good! The general framework is considered a traditional fairy tale! The rebirth of design can also be done without being obtrusive! The protagonist's character is very Chinese-style, smooth and sophisticated, and it would be impossible to write about it without some experience! He can have the heart of a Bodhisattva and the angry eyes of a Vajra! It can be seen that the author spent a lot of effort to understand the fighting design of the Chinese martial arts. Although there are flaws, the flaws are not hidden! It can be seen that I was a complete layman before, but it is great to be able to write it through the combination of literature! The author's writing skills are also very solid, and he feels very talented! Now the only thing left to get out of the circle is experience! The story must have pain points and empathy, and the technique of suppressing first and then elevating must be perfect! Every masterpiece has famous scenes! Finally, congratulations to the author for the perfect ending of his first work! Looking forward to your follow-up! Come on!

After reading the first and second chapters, I already felt that it was well written, with content and soul. I saw Chapter 7. The writing is concise and orderly with good details and informative content. The author's meticulous writing and wisdom are revealed between the lines! When I saw Chapter 103, the author made the characters flesh and blood and soul. The summary of Chapter 130 is very insightful! Chapter 316 is so relevant that the characters have souls. The post-war part of Chapter 515 feels a bit watery. The ending is very good. The earth is also a prison. The protagonist uses the formation to revive the aura of the earth. There will also be immortal cultivators on the earth! I hope the author will write a second book about cultivating immortals on earth, and imagine that Earth's scientific civilization plus cultivating immortals will really compete for hegemony in the universe!