Honkai: Star Rail: I Become a Xianzhou General in the Forbidden Zone of National Destiny

It's very interesting, and it's the first Star Railway article about the national fortunes that I've seen in Tomato. Can the author write two male protagonists? I especially like Yuanyuan [Love]

Nice! I've read a lot of similar role-playing articles about national games, and many of the protagonists have nothing to do with the characters and are OOC. This one doesn't have any OOC scenes so far, except for the part describing Sylva's appearance, but overall it's great! The author will update the article quickly (Sa Po Rolling, please update ing)

It's quite beautiful (I'd like to ask if there's a female protagonist) [Sending my heart]

The writing is very good, and there are no problems with the characters, such as Sambo, Xi'er and other characters. Compared with the overall plot, the time they appear is not very long. In addition, the timeline is different, so it can be regarded as not a big problem. After all, it is a fan, and it cannot be exactly the same as the original. Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง Ignore some people, they can't write it themselves, and they are talking about others here, hehe~ Some people with bad eyesight should not call out here. Did I mention Jingyuan's character design? If you have bad eyesight, don't bring trouble to others. And I didn't even mention a person's name. Some people took it upon themselves to take the position. Don't I deserve to be scolded? Really convinced

It's super interesting. Jing Yuan's character design is not broken. The only shortcoming is that there are too few. Author, please don't make me kneel down and beg you to type.

The writing is good, one of the few books in Tomato that I like. Unfortunately, I didn't write much when I discovered it. Now I update it every day, so the author will accept the reward and update it every day [Chigua]. The daily updates are simply not enough to read. It's been a while since I've looked at it. There have been a lot of updates. It's so full. It's so beautiful and I love to read it [Learned]

I have read this book. It is quite good in terms of national destiny, and the plot is quite to my liking. But I want to ask something. After writing Belloberg, will the author still write about Luofu? If you write, please update it soon. I want to see Jing Yuan and Jing Yuan meet [smile][smile][smile]

Yay! It's pretty good. There is no emotional line so far! I hope there is no heroine, come on!

It's great. I've watched it over and over again many times. The plot where the actor and the real person stick together is the first time I have seen it in a book of the same type, and I surprisingly accepted it well www Please update more about the author, children will love reading it ^q^

Nice The story of National Games Beng Tie is of very good quality, but the author writes it a bit quickly. He doesn't have to follow the main plot line all the time and adds some branch lines. Many holes dug by Beng Tie's new plot have not been filled in. The story of Yunshang Wuhai can only be regarded as unraveling a corner. Even Jing Yuan's setting in the official setting is incomplete. For example, what is the real name of the blade? The dead fox woman? What are the details of Jingliu taking Jingyuan as his disciple? What are the specific circumstances of the family that broke away from Jing Yuan? What are the details after Jingliu turned into a demonic body? Where did the scroll on Jing Yuan come from? Who are the seven generals of Emperor Gong? Such a big thing happened to Luofu. Why didn't there be any movement in other immortal boats? These are all mysteries. There were many details that were not broadcast during the general's interrogation. If the current plot development progress is followed, it is easy to have incomplete settings and then be backstabbed by MiHoYo. It is better to create some self-designed branch plots to delay the plot first, or add some butterfly effects to the progress of the main plot to slow down the plot.