Star Rail National Destiny: Playing Acheron, I Swear to Slay the Gods!
星铁国运：扮演黄泉，立誓斩神！
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I’m So Done With Playing a Loser. Give Me Something Decent
Looking for High-Quality Honkai: Star Rail Fanfiction!!!
Looking for National Destiny or Livestream Stories Where the Viewers Aren’t Idiots, Preferably With Clever Analysis
The protagonist should be smart. Strange tales, the Backrooms, the Foundation, and so on are fine, but no underground caves or forbidden zones.
Any Good Honkai: Star Rail Fanfiction?
[Remember, I'm only collecting Honkai: Star Rail stories. No need to send ones I've posted before, since I've already bookmarked them. Thanks in advance to everyone sharing recommendations!] (A thousand topics to recommend, but this laid-back poster only browses half of them.)
Seeking Honkai: Star Rail Stories!
Are there any Honkai: Star Rail novels? Getting stabbed in the back was rough, but the story is still really good, so I want to read some! *٩(๑´∀`๑)ง*
Any Honkai: Star Rail Fanfiction with a Female Protagonist? No Gender-Swapped Men
Looking for books similar to Honkai: Star Rail: Becoming a Star God from the Start.
I’m Out of Books to Read, Give Me Some Transformation Stories
Give me some fresh transformation stories. I've already read so many of them.
National Destiny Challenges with Role-Playing, Preferably with Teammates, Please!
Looking for a National Destiny Story Where the Protagonist Reveals Their Strength From the Start!
Set up the System so that each country has several of its strongest people at present! Whenever someone dies, the next strongest person takes their place, while that country is punished...
Looking for Honkai: Star Rail Stories Where the Protagonist Is an Emanator or Is Close to an Aeon
Please, Books About Acheron From Honkai: Star Rail!
I want a book similar to All Beasts Attack: Huang Quan's Journey to Bona. Please!
Hand Over the Honkai: Star Rail Roleplay Stories!
Looking for books similar to *Honkai: Star Rail: Playing as Tongtian, I Split a Star with One Sword*.
Any Roleplay Stories Featuring Robin, Acheron, Jingliu, Sparkle, or Ruan Mei?
Looking for books similar to *National Destiny: Playing Acheron, with Firefly and Sparkle as Teammates*.
Any Good National-Fortune Stories? No Long-Winded Debates
I want something similar to Honkai: Star Rail: I Became a Xianzhou General in the National Destiny Forbidden Zone.
There’s No Good Honkai: Star Rail National Destiny Fiction? Prove Me Wrong
Looking for books similar to *Interstellar Railway: Invincible as Jing Yuan in the Nation’s Destiny Game*.
Please, I’m Begging for Cosplay Transmigration!!!
Please, I need novels where the protagonist (preferably the male lead) cosplays as anime or game characters and travels through different worlds!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The Compassionate Medicine King Transmigrates to Other Worlds with Honkai: Star Rail Abilities
Looking for books like The Outcast: I’m an Emanator of Abundance!
Other Worlds Watching Honkai: Star Rail, or Honkai: Star Rail Characters Traveling to Other Worlds
Give the people of another world a taste of the Honkai: Star Rail universe's shocking power.
Looking for a National Fortune Story Where the Protagonist Has a Role-Playing Template
A national-destiny story where the protagonist takes on the role of an anime character.
Give Me Some New Honkai: Star Rail Books! Need Them ASAP!
Looking for books like Honkai: Star Rail: From the Start, I Set Up the Aeon of Abundance on a Blind Date. Ideally, the protagonist is already an invincible Aeon from the start, you know?
Any Stories Where Honkai: Star Rail Characters Transmigrate to Take Part in National Destiny (Rules Horror), Without Breaking Character?
Looking for books like *Rules of the Strange: The Black Tower Runs Rampant Through the Anomaly World*.
Roleplay, Transformation, Honkai Impact 3Rd, Honkai: Star Rail, Genshin Impact
Looking for books like Rules of Horror: Silver Wolf Can Freely Rewrite the Rules. Any kind souls willing to share books you think are good? Games, anime, or novels like Honkai Impact 3rd and Honkai: Star Rail are welcome. Role-playing and transformation stories are fine too.
Roleplay or Cosplay, Urban Life, and Everyday Moments
Everyday life cosplaying as someone at a comic convention.
Looking for Novels Where Characters from miHoYo Games Transmigrate into Anime Worlds
Looking for books like Detective Conan: Secret Identities from Teyvat. Any world is fine.
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You are a Huangquan player, and what you want to do is to patrol the battlefield of the National Games. After seeing various monsters, you only need to do it without hesitation, with overwhelming force, slash with three knives and a big slash with one knives, and finally breathe a sigh of relief, almost soiling your sleeves again!
Judging from the current content, this book is a book that can be collected. It is recommended that the author not change the background and character design of Huang Quan now, otherwise it will easily lose a large number of people who fell into the trap due to the early stage, and the gain outweighs the loss. Then, you must learn to write Kawen. Raising readers' expectations. Although lags are disgusting, for new articles with no traffic base, it is the easiest way to retain readers. After writing 100,000 words, it's almost time to get to the point. At this time, you can also increase traffic for your book. Because I am the kind of person who doesn't like gender change, I didn't dare to read the first chapter. I suggest the author not to mention his previous gender when writing later, but write with his current identity, otherwise it will be really easy to cause drama. I just discovered that you are also the author of the book "Reincarnation as Kafka". I would like to give you some advice based on that book. 1. If the setting of this book is still that the protagonist is himself, then it is not recommended to have a greater emotional connection with aborigines other than Fu Xuan. 2. The improvement of role-playing value should be reflected in some small actions, rather than deliberate performance, or inexplicable. Even if it is inexplicable, there should be some pre-performance, such as thinking of something, being affected by something, and the behavior begins to change. 3. If you want to connect the protagonist with other Bengtie characters, there should be some foreshadowing in the previous text, so that it will not appear obtrusive. For example, who wants to rescue her and chase her, posing a life threat to her, or the protagonist flashes some debts she owes in the memory. In short, there must be some connections, it can be not many, but it cannot be absent. 4. Then there are the habits of the protagonist in life. Just like in Chapter 16, she said she has to put on makeup. In such a situation, the following explanation can be written as she does it subconsciously. Don't deliberately emphasize that it is just to improve the role value. If it happens too many times, it will feel inconsistent with the character, and the whole article will almost start to collapse. (Note: All premise is that the identity of the protagonist is himself) The author's first country destiny novel, I think the reasons for its collapse are: 1. The contrast between before and after is huge, 2. The interest relationship does not fit the character, 3. The ending is inexplicable, and the identity changes This is only the most important thing. The secondary thing is that the writing style is ordinary, which is normal. After reading several books with very good endings, I felt that the ending of that book could be changed to an ending that leaves a lot of room for imagination. There is no need to hang myself on one ending. This is the most important suggestion that I have put together from two books. I will add more later.
Write so little? Who do you look down on? Write ten pages a day! [Cool][Cool][Cool]
Chapter 8, I can see the level of this book, it's pretty good
Nice. Why is the title so similar to the one next door?
I have a friend who was so angry that the author was too slow to update. He cried and fussed, so pitiful, so the author should update quickly!
Great support, author. As long as the quality is good, I don't care about the word count.
Very nice! ! I hope the author will continue to update! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]
The character structure of Huangquan is a bit crumbling, and the middle chapters have no highlights. If there are too many character dialogues, it will be a bit ink. Please write more about the main story. Also, please update quickly
Ahhhhh! Nice! Renew! ! ! ! Huang Quan's character is not OOC at all!