Harry Potter and Marvel: The End of Science Is Magic

I'm really looking forward to this book because I really like the theme of the collaboration between Marvel and HP. I've had it on my bookshelf for a long time and just started reading it today. Maybe my expectations were too high, so I was quite disappointed. The writing style was a bit poor and the expression was a bit messy. The author gave the heroine a strong identity and strength, but her character was never quite right. It was clearly a rebirth novel, but the heroine behaved more like a beginner who had just swapped bodies with a boss, so I felt it was awkward. The two lives did not look like the same person. There is a lightning point here, that is, the protagonist is a doormat. In order to show the protagonist's calmness, he chooses to ignore no matter how others scold him or make small moves, and only starts to fight back when others step on the bottom line. This is what everyone hates when they complain about some cool articles. The last two chapters of the whole book are so enjoyable. I hope the author pays attention to this. Pansy was like this in the early stage, and it was quite tiring to read. Also, there are too many OOCs. Although I know it is normal to read OOC fanfics, the one who is not off track in this is Hermione. All in all, the subject matter is still very novel. As long as I improve the writing style and clarify the protagonist's personality, it will be a good article.

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The content is very good and the plot is very attractive, but it always feels like the heroine has a kind of reborn arrogance and will look at this life from the perspective of her previous life. This is reflected in the fact that she always calls Professor Snape as her apprentice and looks at her current situation as a Muggle wizard in the academy as a former pure-blood noble. Although she had some reflection after her cat was injured, there was no result after her small revenge, and she did not change her principles of dealing with things after that. She still looked at everything from the perspective of her previous life. It seems that he has forgotten that his current identity is different

Why is no one posting book reviews? This book is really a blast! ! !

I want to ask if the CP is Snape. I don't like Severus very much.

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Super fragrant! From my point of view, it is very comfortable for me to read, and there is no particularly abrupt feeling. There may be some problems with some small details, but it is acceptable and great. As long as the author continues to maintain this rhythm, then there is absolutely no problem with this article!

It's not bad, but most of it feels like it just adds a little bit of Marvel's plot based on the original work, and the author's own creations, which are very few at present. Then the heroine's protagonist status is not clearly reflected, and she mainly acts around the original protagonist group.

As a long-time fan of the original work, I will feel that the timeline is a bit messy. Everything is for the sake of the plot. It is understandable. The plot of Philosopher's Stone has been changed a lot. After all, it has original content. I hope it can be filled in in the end. As a fan, overall it is really good. Come on ↖(^ω^)↗

The writing is quite good, why is the score so low? Maybe the author is a little slow to follow (ˊ˘ˋ*)♡