The Seven Demon God Sisters in My Home

I'll give myself five stars once I finish writing the story of my eighth daughter! She's coming! ~😘

Wow~ I really didn't expect this! It's been so long since I've read a novel this amazing (I can't think of a word to describe it 😓). The setting is incredibly grand, and even though I skipped over a hundred chapters, I was still blown away! The author writes so well, don't tell me your writing skills are lacking!

Current progress: Chapter 191 (This is my first book review, please correct any mistakes). The story introduces eight characters at the beginning, briefly setting up their personalities before jumping into the plot, making the early stages interesting, but also leaving the reader with a problem of insufficient character development.

[Highly Rated] This book is indeed very well written; it suddenly feels a bit out of place on Tomato's writing style. After all, Tomato has the most light novels. The writing is very smooth, and it's clear the author has a solid foundation. I imagine they also have works on other platforms, which I could recommend. It's been a long time since I've seen such a smooth novel on Tomato.

I love the style of this light novel (✪▽✪), and the plot unfolds very well. Although I haven't seen the main storyline yet, I hope it's just about happily fighting monsters and enjoying sweet moments in daily life. However, if possible, I'd like to add some harem elements, like maids or something (a small request, mainly because some readers might be interested in incest, so it's okay if it's not…

I've lost count of how long I've been reading this. At first, I was drawn in by the world-building, which really caught my eye. So I kept reading until the appearance of the Eighth Sister. Personally, I don't really like the parallel world concept; they call it a "clone mine." Then, after reading the author's review at the end of chapter 242, I had a little more hope.

I have high hopes for the subject matter of this work, the protagonist and her eight younger sisters. However, its shortcomings are also quite obvious. ① Firstly, the character descriptions of several of the seven younger sisters are rather vague, mainly focusing on Shio, Momiji, Ryouka, and the eldest sister.

The author writes quite well; the plot holes are filled in and the author tells you in which chapter the holes were planted. I feel this book shouldn't have such a low rating. The first hundred chapters of plot setup are a bit long, which is what deterred most readers, but it's very okay if you read it slowly. The second volume starts to get on track, and I look forward to seeing more from the author. Keep up the good work!

Well, overall it's alright. But I have a feeling that it's better to leave Eighth Sister in this world later. After all, you said the artifact completely obliterates any trace of a person, so there's no possibility of resurrection. But you can't just leave another world unattended. And since you said she's the eighth sister, her brother from her original world shouldn't be resurrected either.

The author's writing is quite good. The cryptic tone at the beginning might drive some readers away, but that's not a big problem; if you persevere, it will still be very exciting. I'm really looking forward to seeing those two mysterious figures. I must say, the author's plot twists are very well done. I've read many books, some excellent, some terrible. But this book is quite good. Keep it up, author!