The Seven Demon God Sisters in My Home

When I insist on writing until the eighth daughter comes out, I will give myself five stars! She's coming!~[Blowing kiss]

Ha~ I really didn't expect it. I haven't seen such a novel in a long time (I can't think of words to describe it😓). In short, the setting is very grand. Even though I skipped more than a hundred chapters to read it, I was still shocked! The author writes very well, don't say that your writing skills are not good! The novel written by the author made me regain the excitement I felt when reading novels in the past! I really want to express my deep gratitude to the author for his novel! I will finish this novel word by word, as a token of my gratitude to the author for helping me regain my sense of the past. Finally: The author must keep writing! Be sure not to despise yourself! Come on, great author! ☺️☺️☺️

Current progress: Chapter 191 (first time writing a book review, please correct me if there are any mistakes) 8 characters appear at the beginning of the story. The characters are briefly laid out before entering the plot, which makes the early stage interesting, but it also leaves the problem of insufficient character development. Of course, the author's remedies can also be seen in the following text. Japanese light novels are a rare genre in Tomato, and psychological descriptions seem to be relatively rare in Tomato (maybe I don't read them enough). This is a breath of fresh air. I also ask the author to update it quickly to attract more readers (I have absolutely no selfish intentions, please understand) Of course, I still hope that the author can add more descriptions of the environment. After all, one of the three elements, the environment, is also about saving face... When talking about the description of the environment, it can better set off the character's mood. For example, writing about two sunsets: the first time he did not accept the confession or he was not around and the second time... ... And then comparing it can highlight the inner changes of the character. The article seems to involve parallel universes or time travel, neither of which are easy to deal with. I look forward to the author's follow-up treatment. Finally, let me explain the reason for the rating. Three stars give strength, one star gives features, and the remaining one star is used for encouragement. 2023.12.4

[Special praise] This book is really well written, but suddenly it feels like it doesn't fit the style of writing in Tomato. After all, Tomato has the most white text. The article is written very smoothly, and it seems that the author has a solid foundation. I must have articles on other platforms and can recommend them to everyone. After all, I haven't seen such a smooth novel in Tomato for a long time. Although I don't know why the rating is only 7.6. Because in my mind, this is already a four-star or above online article. Especially in the author's description, I recall the domestic light novel platforms and the two most glorious years of Guokyou. I guess the author must have often watched SF, Kingdom of Light. I do feel that there are still some shadows of other Guokyou in the novel.

I love the style of the light novel (✪▽✪), and the plot is also very well developed. Although I haven't seen what the main plot is, I hope that the main plot is to happily fight monsters and give out sweets every day. However, if possible, I hope to add some types of harem, such as maids and the like (a small request, mainly Some readers may come here for orthopedics, but if it doesn't work, just forget about it [Salute]) And don't have any more knives in the future. After all, the protagonist has been stunned by the knife. I hope the full text is about relaxing. Life is already very unhappy, so why not just be happy? I feel that this book has great potential. I hope the author can stick to it [Like][Like][Like] I hope I can write more, maybe more than 3 million words. This book has such potential, so please give it a try (ง •̀_•́)ง

I am very optimistic about the theme of this work, the protagonist and her eight sisters However, the shortcomings are also obvious. ① First of all, the character descriptions of several of the seven sisters are very vague, mainly Xi, Hongye, Lingxiang and the eldest sister. The descriptions of other characters are much less (after all, the description of multiple characters is always a big problem). My suggestion is to appropriately reduce some characters. The characters do not need to be too many, but they must be precise. ②Secondly, the plot jumps too much, and there is a long period of recalling the plot while reading. This affects the reading experience very much and makes you forget the previous steps. My suggestion here is to simplify or set it up as a side story.

The author's writing is quite good. He will fill in any pitfalls in the story and tell you which chapter the pitfalls in the story are in. I feel that this book should not only have this score. The plot in the first hundred chapters is a bit long, which is why most people are put off, but it is also very good as you read it slowly╭(╯ε╰)╮The second volume is starting to get on the right track. I look forward to the author's performance. Keep up the hard work O(∩_∩)O

I can't remember how long I watched it. When I first read this novel, I was attracted by the world view and it made my eyes light up. So I kept reading until Bamei appeared. Personally, I don't really like the idea of ​​parallel worlds. According to them, it's a clone of mine. Then in Chapter 242, I saw the author's book review at the end. Then I looked forward to it a little longer. The result is that I am getting more and more confused now. I was a little dizzy watching that parallel world war. Personally, I feel a bit confused. Maybe it's because my understanding is not good enough, haha. The result is that I still haven't seen the results I wanted to see. Hey, I understand that the frequency of the author's updates is getting slower and slower. After all, the author generates electricity purely for love. Work must still come first. Just can I ask how many words it takes to get to the late sweet love life in the synopsis of your book by the author😭😭. This is the part I'm most looking forward to. There are still a few sisters who have not yet established a relationship. It made me very anxious😭. Rather than a huge world view, I want to see sweet daily love😭😭Xi's ferris wheel confession. There's also Ayaka and Nayumi's confession. It's really fun for me to see. It's been a long time since I've felt this way. I am also very satisfied with the portrayal of the male protagonist. Having said so much, I don't know if the author can see it. Overall your work is very good. It's been a long time since I saw the sweet daily life between brother and sister. Well, I don't know when I will read your work next time. Maybe next year? Maybe the year after tomorrow? Or maybe longer? I don't know either. I wonder if we will be able to see Tiantian's daily love life by then? A little bit of expectation. That's all, thank you to the author for letting me have the pleasure of reading this excellent work. Goodbye. Goodbye. (˵¯͒¯͒˵)

How to say it? Overall it's okay. But I feel that I still want Bamei to stay in this world. After all, you said that the artifact completely annihilated all traces of people. So there is no possibility of resurrection. But we can't leave the other world alone. And since you said she is the eighth sister. Then his brother from the original world should not be resurrected. Unless you didn't write the character setting of Bamei from the beginning, it would appear inconsistent. I've been watching it for so long now. I really hope the author doesn't resurrect Bamei's brother from her original world. And you said it too. Bamei has the ability to travel through time and space. She is fully capable of traveling into the past. To change the future. So instead of resurrecting his brother from the original world later, it would be better for him to live a good life as the eighth sister in this world. After all, you have already set up a Bamei persona. And you still have a hole to fill. It's the first masked man. You haven't made it clear about his ending or origin. But whether the trap is heavy or not is up to you. But some attentive readers may notice it. I hope the author will consider this carefully. I also hope the author can continue writing. I'll see how much more you have. If you publish a new book, I will pick it up. (ง •̀_•́)งCome on

The author writes well. If you use charades at the beginning, you may drive away many readers. But it's not a big problem. If you keep reading, you will still find it exciting. But now I'm looking forward to those two mysterious people. I have to say that the author played the trap very well. I have read a lot of books, some excellent ones and some terrible ones. But the author's book is quite good. Author, come on!