I Become a Big Shot in a World of Magic

No wonder nobody reads it. I only started awakening magic after reading chapter 27, and then the rich kid forcibly interrupted me during the awakening process. After being interrupted, he didn't show any anger at all, as if he didn't care, and even planned to continue awakening next time. He's both cowardly and pathetic.

It's not good; it's confusing and makes my head spin.

It's written like a diary.

That's definitely not an option. Ordinary people have the opportunity to wield power, yet they avoid it like the plague.

The writing is good, but the pacing is too slow, and there's absolutely no sense of excitement in the early stages.

A good book, worth recommending.