I Crowdfunded an Empire in Another World

It's really good so far, keep going.

Tomato is one of the rare novels with serious writing and self-consistent logic. The protagonist has a relatively distinct personality, the golden finger is not too big, the plot is full of tension, and the group portraits are well drawn. If the plot can be stabilized, the novel has great potential.

Yes, that's true, but can magic cannons appear in the later stage? Although gunpowder can't cause much damage there, adding magic will make it different. Still looking forward to the current weapons.

It's really good. I fell asleep while watching it and had a dream in another world. In the dream, I was still the prince who led the army. I also summoned the fighting spirit of a hero. There seemed to be some kind of South Fang. I was woken up by the alarm clock. I quickly recorded it before I forgot.

No one? Anyone? Anyone? No one?

Why did it stop? The setting of this book is very good. Pay more attention to details and less water. It will definitely become popular.

So far, the novel has been very successful in shaping the online protagonist with all the IQ characters. Xia Lan can be said to be one of the most charismatic protagonists in the novels I have read. He is not very powerful, but his strategy is first-rate. He is not a born king. He did not give up on his men when facing the Griffin King. He will also feel confused after the death of the warrior, but he is a qualified king.

It's too short, it's really hard on my sister-in-law.

A rare good book. The last time I saw such a good Western fantasy novel was the last time [laughing evilly] The plot of the story is very touching, the description of the characters is also very vivid, each character has its own characteristics, and Jianguo's writing is also very burning and legendary. It is rare to see such an orthodox and well-written Western fantasy novel on Tomato. It can be seen that the author is still very capable. However, I would like to make a comment, that is, the author described many supporting characters in the early days of the founding of the People's Republic of China. These characters were also well described and had their own characteristics. They were not popularized and looked like independent characters. It felt a bit like writing a group portrait. But the problem is, this is a Western fantasy novel [face covering]. The names of the characters described are all foreigners, so I can't remember them! Every time I see the name of some supporting characters, it's like a new character, and I have to search the full text to find out what this person did [face covering]. Therefore, it is recommended that the author add a Chinese code name before the name of the supporting character, which can greatly improve the reading experience of readers. For example, who was the first to break through Silver? If you add a murloc so-and-so, everyone will know that this person is the murloc who killed a boatload of people and was tied up by everyone, and they will have an instant impression. That person with two characters seems to be from the White Wolf clan, so he is called White Wolf. The son of the Marquis of Blackwater didn't have an old servant, so he added "old servant" in front of his name to identify himself. Add a code name or identity in front of the name. This can make a good distinction. The word count can also kill two birds with one stone. [Note] There are also some important supporting characters because the descriptions are very impressive, but it is best to add them, otherwise readers who have read many books will easily forget them when they look back. For example, the blue dragon and the one named Faox seem to have the same country name, so it may be easy to confuse them. Also, some aristocratic forces should be given code names, such as the Golden Family, the Rose Family, the Light of the North, etc. It sounds like Dior is easy to remember. Of course, I'm just making a suggestion. It's up to the author to decide what to do. There is no need to add it in every paragraph, at least add it when it is mentioned for the first time in each chapter so that it is not obtrusive and cumbersome.

The plot looks very exciting to me. But there were too many nobles, and it was hard to tell who belonged to which force.