Reborn as a Shota, I Want to Become a Fox Immortal

Your valuable suggestions are very important to me. Therefore, I have decided to revise the entire book, adding more content after the marriage in Chapter 25, slowing down the pace of the plot, and focusing on more detailed descriptions to ensure coherence. If you have read up to Chapter 25 in Volume 1, I recommend reading the contents of Volume 2 first. I am writing this review to remind myself that things require patience and speed; haste makes waste.

A good-looking novel, but with few readers (｡ò ∀ ó｡), and a very lazy author @ (ಡωಡ)

Bro, please, just one more chapter! I can't take it anymore, please, bro 😭 I feel like ants are crawling all over me, I'm shaking so much, I can't breathe, please, bro 😭 Just one more chapter, just one more, I promise I'll never touch this again, please, bro 😭, really, just one chapter, I swear I'll never touch this stuff again, I just can't take it anymore 🥵

I'll give you my heart's content. But you can't get carried away, you have to go even further 🙂🙂🙂😏 or I'll make you cry 🥺

I've been reading this book for a long time, and I'll briefly share my thoughts. Initially, the character Bai Cai (a character from a popular Chinese novel) was a little fox for far too long. After reading for a while, he was still just a fox, and the early plot didn't really engage me. I felt it was pointless, so I briefly abandoned it.

The story is captivating, and the world-building, from its initial small scale to its grand scale, is handled quite well, neither abrupt nor confusing. Anyone who has written a book knows this; maintaining such a pace is remarkable, especially for a novice. It seems the author has experience writing before, or at least practiced.

The backpack is cool 😎, the knife-in-a-knife design 🤦, the author is quite active 💕, it's just a bit too long to read, but that's also a good thing! (This "too long to read" doesn't mean the content isn't rich enough, but rather that you want to keep reading and can't stop.)

It's visually appealing, yes, but there are many typos; it's quite ruthless; there are very few readers; the author's career is short-lived; and it's a pitiful existence. It's beautiful, but author, look at my comments—almost 60-70% are typos! If you see them, please correct them. 😄 @

(The reading time is short because I mostly read it offline at school.) I started reading this book in June 2023. After seeing the latest update, I started to "grow" the book, but then I changed accounts and forgot about it. This May, I saw a cabbage on the cafeteria table and suddenly remembered that I seemed to have read a book before with a protagonist also named Cabbage, and who was super…

Don't be fooled by the low ratings, everyone! This is one of the few good books I've kept. The main character is really cute, and the character development is excellent. The beginning might be a little difficult to read, but it gets better and better as you read on! There are a few more typos later on, but it doesn't have a big impact.