Reborn as a Shota, I Want to Become a Fox Immortal

Your valuable suggestions are very important to me. So I decided to revise the entire story and add some content after the marriage in Chapter 25. The plot was also slowed down and focused on description to make the plot coherent. The first volume has reached Chapter 25. It is recommended to read the second volume first. I would like to comment here to remind myself that things need to be done in a hurry, and haste makes waste.

A good-looking but less popular novel (｡ò ∀ ó｡), and the author of Zhen's Lazy @ (ಡωಡ)

Brother, please give me one more chapter, I'm dying, please, brother😭, I feel like there are ants crawling on my body, I feel like I'm shaking all over, and I can't breathe, please, brother😭, just give me one more chapter, just one more chapter, I'll never touch it again, please, brother😭, really, just one chapter, I swear I will never touch this thing again, I really can't bear it anymore🥵

Give you a full heart. But you can't get carried away and go to death even more [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] or I'll cry for you [I'm about to cry]

I have been reading this book for a long time. Let me briefly share my thoughts. At first, Baicai had been a little fox for too long. I watched him for a while and he was still a fox. The previous plot really didn't attract me. I felt it was uninteresting, so I gave up for a while. My criteria for abandoning a book are: after I abandon it for the first time, I will come back and read it again after a while. If the book still doesn't attract me after such a long time, I will decisively abandon it. After I came back, I felt that the plot of the whole book felt more compact, and it no longer seemed so inexplicable and nonsensical. The rich and compact plot, the delicate description, and the vivid depiction of the characters... I fell in love with this book very quickly. When I read the book, I really felt immersed in it. The author was very serious and responsible in describing every detail, every foreshadowing, and even every tiny movement. This is one of the few treasures I have found, highly recommended! ! Like it 😍! ! !

The story is exciting, and the worldview is well controlled from small to large, without seeming abrupt or confusing. Anyone who has written a book knows this. It is very difficult for a novice to control this speed. I feel that this is probably not the first time the author has written a book. Even if it is the first time, he has practiced it. Then there is the matter of character. The characters in the author's works have very distinct personalities and have their own set of rules of conduct. At least so far, I have not encountered any overlapping characters. This is quite rare. So far, the things the characters have done are very consistent with the characters, but in order to avoid spoilers, Han Longlong will not go into details. The plot is not bad, but the organization is a bit messy, and the author's outline is not particularly clear. But overall it's quite exciting! Apart from this point, everything else is impeccable. Finally, thank you to the author for bringing us such a beautiful book! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

The school bag looks good [cool], the knife wrapped around it [face covering], and the author is quite lively [sending heartfelt messages], but it's just a bit unsightly, but this can be considered an advantage! (Not enough here does not mean that the content is not rich, but it means that I still want to read after watching it and cannot stop at all)

Good-looking is good-looking, there are many typos, the knife is very sharp, the readers are few, the author is very short, and cabbage is pitiful It's nice, but author, if you look at the comments I posted, nearly 60-70% of them are typos. If you see them, I hope you can correct them [laughs] @

(The duration is not long because most of them are watched offline at school) I started reading this book in June 23. I started reading it when I saw the updated parts. I changed my account and forgot about this book (). In May of this year, I saw the cabbage in front of me on the dining table in the cafeteria. It suddenly occurred to me that I had read a book before. The protagonist was also called cabbage, and he was super cute [laughing]. Then I found the book again based on the name of the protagonist, and I just started reading this book two years ago. The amazing feeling I felt when reading this book also allowed me to find some solace in the heavy study pressure in high school (two cuties falling in love makes me feel beautiful [thinking]) [laughing] The only flaw is that I have been reading this book for two years, but I finished it in two weeks [understood] I hope the author will be happy every day and never die (you must stick to it, my big brother (sister) who loves to write shota novels) [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] The narration of the secondary characters is also very natural. After reading it, I felt a sudden and distressed feeling towards Zi Xi. Every character in the book is searching for the truth in his or her heart, and then working hard towards his or her happy ending. Cabbage is the best! Most! Most! Does the cute little fox understand? [I understand]

Please don't be fooled by the low ratings. This is one of the few good books that can leave me a lasting impression. The protagonist is really cute, and the various characters are well controlled. It may be a bit uncomfortable to watch in the early stage, but the more you watch, the better it becomes! There are a lot of typos at the end, but they don't have much impact.