Streamer, You Call This Ghost Hunting?

This is my first work. I wrote it with full confidence. I didn't have an outline. I just thought about the general plot. When I first updated it, I didn't expect that many people would read it. For this, I also received a lot of criticism. The emotional line was completely written down. I was confused. I stopped updating for a while and changed the love line. However, there were some chapters that could not be changed and I had to keep them. Later, I updated them one after another. Unexpectedly, some old viewers were still following the updates. I was very touched. I will definitely finish this book this year.

So far, it's exciting. It's a system-less start for ordinary people. It's pretty cool. I hope it won't turn into fantasy or immortality later in the writing.

Like it very much! The plot is exciting! The content of every live broadcast attracts me! Is it possible not to have a female protagonist? The hero should concentrate on his career! The author should update it quickly, it's not enough! [Sending Hearts]

The plot of the dungeon, well, I shouldn't say dungeon, I should say that the plot design involving weird things is very good. It can be regarded as the best choice among online novels, and it still has a very scary and weird atmosphere. There are also some small flaws in the details. For example, the protagonist's character is bold, but sometimes he is too cowardly. In fact, ordinary people may also behave this way, so it is not too dramatic, but I don't know how the author will shape the image of the protagonist later. Another example involves the mother who shielded her. It is not yet seen that this mother has been judged in reality. But these are minor issues, and the copy alone can actually be five-star. But in reality, the plot will inevitably fall into the cliché. Deduct one point. First, I don't care if there is a female protagonist or not, but the relationship develops too quickly and suddenly, and the sense of boundaries between the male and female protagonists at the beginning is too low. One shook hands when he came up, and the other one twisted his ears when he came up later, but they probably weren't that familiar. Secondly, the appearance of the real villain so far, the young master, is purely to promote the plot, but this kind of promotion is quite cliché. To sum up, I estimate that I will skip the real-life plot at a glance, and then take a closer look at the weird parts of the live broadcast. Also because Weird Live is currently well-written, I can give it four stars.

The writing in the first few copies is okay, but the content in the middle part is a bit watery, but the latest copy of Qingshan Hospital is not bad. I give you a five-star review. Keep up the good work, don't stop updating! Write the plot of the dungeon well!

The writing is quite good, but I have to say that on Tomato, there is no need for a female protagonist if the male protagonist is the perspective, and there is no need for a male protagonist if the female protagonist is the protagonist. This is because most authors inexplicably weaken them when describing these people, and their behavior is somewhat unreasonable. The author actually has this in this book. Part of the problem is that there are some disadvantages in the description of the two women who appear to connect the plot. For example, Officer Song's feelings for the male protagonist came too suddenly. If it took a long time and the feelings gradually deepened, it would be understandable, but it is too fast, so it is best not to do so. Officer Song can be said to be useful, but the emotional line is not very good, and the other one is too energetic. The description makes people feel that this person is unreasonable, so it makes people feel bored, and the unreasonableness is unacceptable to most viewers, whether it is the male protagonist or the female protagonist. But the plots in the live broadcast are pretty good, keep up the good work!

This book deserves five stars. The plot written by the author is quite exciting, much better than other stories written there. This article was so exciting and tense that I didn't even dare to read it at night. I hope the author can continue to persevere, Huai Ting, come on

I have caught up to the latest update. Judging from the time span, it seems that the author has stopped updating for a long time. Some plots are obviously disconnected, but in general, the story is okay. Moreover, after the author resumed the update in December, his writing skills are obviously much better than in the previous period. I give you a five-star review. I hope the author will work hard and not stop updating again [laughing][laughing][laughing]

Good review! It made me feel like when I watched "I Feel Like a House of Horrors", the protagonist was so cruel! I would give him the title of Sledgehammer

Judging from the story content and plot alone, it is really impeccable. It is immersive and full of horror atmosphere. Especially when the Owlman came for the first time after Lin returned home, it really made me nervous, exciting and scared [stunned]. But, because the author said in the introduction that there is no heroine, but as far as the part of the article I have read now, there are two female characters. I haven't seen the end yet, and I don't know them. How important it is to promote the plot in the early stage, or to foreshadow the development of the subsequent plot. I just feel that they appear too many times, especially Song. I don't understand it very well. There will definitely be some drama between her and Wang, and then Lin will appear to save her. This can be seen in the plot, but if she keeps appearing in the main plot, then there may be emotional problems in the follow-up. I really don't want to see this in a novel without a female protagonist. Then there is Qiu, this is even more inexplicable. A woman appears out of nowhere and says she is a fan of "me" and wants to take risks with me. Then she inexplicably obtains "my" information through illegal means. After adding "I", she inexplicably Miao attacks "I"... This sequence is so inexplicable that it makes people feel a little speechless [laughs] and as far as these two characters are concerned, it makes me feel like they are having a harem [something]. I hope the author can respond to whether there will be a harem. Apart from this, this book is really worth recommending [Admiration]