Whatever, She Can Do It All. I’m Slacking Off

It's so good. This is the first time I've read such a good-looking two-female story on Tomato. I really love Jiang's character, and Cen also likes her very much. The three views are also very upright, and the contents are too realistic, especially the part about cyber violence, which is too real. The author claims that this is his first time writing, but I don't believe it. I love this writing style and style. Worth five stars! I really love each other. Jiang and Cen really fall in love with each other. They are so sweet and I like each other. They love each other no matter in the previous life or the next life. I fell in love with the cold and handsome General Cen [licking screen] [shy]

I've read Chapter 15 and I don't know how to evaluate this novel. This is an article with CP. There is almost no description of the meeting between the two after chapter 15. A lot of things have been covered in a few words. If you don't read the pure sweet article, you can't stop giving it sugary crumbs after chapter 15. Regarding psychological description, there is actually no need to add slashes or anything like that. It would be better to just write a single paragraph on the description of the original character. For example: [Feeling a fiery sight, Jiang Jinyue opened her hazy eyes, and what she saw was Yao Cen's eyes reflecting her figure. Jiang Jinyue lost her mind as she looked at the beautiful person infatuatedly. How can someone be so good-looking...] Wouldn't it be more comfortable to write an article composed of words in brackets than slashes? My dear, your writing is good. Try it and beautify your article. Don't use words deliberately. Write descriptions carefully, write scenery in a way that sets it off, pay attention to typos, and write some emotional details in place. The wording may not be perfect and can be changed later, but the general description must be able to hold up. I didn't read the back part, so I don't know how the two of them fell in love, or to what extent it was written, but the small details are more sweet and memorable. A kiss is not just love. I can sit upright, look at you, and take you into my heart with my warm eyes. (Actually, I prefer brainless sweet stories) Of course, this is just a suggestion. I don't mean to educate. I don't want my words to affect your overall style and make this novel confusing. My dear, write well. If you think what I say makes sense, slowly change it. You can also ignore it. After all, writing already holds up half the sky. Come on!

It's beautiful and the plot is very attractive.

Ever since I watched "Her Mountain, Her High", I have been interested in two female protagonists. This one almost perfectly suits my taste, but there are still some shortcomings, that is, it is too slow!

The first three views on the world are unexpectedly positive. Maybe it's because I've read too much Ba Zong's articles, and I'm still a little unaccustomed to suddenly returning to the normal track. I love the characters of the two heroines, they are both powerful, and the stories and ideas in each world are great.

It's super beautiful. This book perfectly hit my preferences. I love the author so much! After looking for so many double heroines, I finally found the first one (wiping tears with a small handkerchief) too few and not enough! Renew! ! !

Very good, Jiang 1! ! ! I really like the main angle of attack. The two heroines also have a very good relationship, which makes them a little bit addictive. It's a pity that I still like Xiaotianwen. Originally, my life was in tatters, so I needed Xiaotianwen to patch things up and relax. This book is not very abusive, but I personally cannot accept any abuse at all. Every time two people get separated by life and death due to various external reasons not long after they have been together [crying] I can't accept it, I really can't accept it. I feel sorry for the two heroines, especially the long wait for the Master [I almost cried]. In the middle and late stages of each world, the two people will think of the companionship and separation in the previous lives. Not long after they were sweet in this world, they separated again, and then went to the next world [Crying] It is so sad. After so much, so much has been lost. Although the feelings and bonds have become stronger, they have never been able to truly stay together. It is really sad. Both heroines are so miserable [sad] In my case, double death can be he (pseudo he), but once you have determined your mind, you will always die twice, or die first ➕ then die, that is not he! Um! No! ! Sad! [Almost crying] It's pretty good to watch, not very sadistic, but I'm not very receptive to cruelty, so I can't stand it anymore. Go to my "Nvt" bookshelf and stay there. If you have a chance to come back in the future [full]

Very good, the content is very novel, the attitude of admitting mistakes is very good, and you don't want to hurt others just because you are the protagonist. The three views are great [Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss] Madam, please update soon

I wasn't very attracted to it at first (just for me), but the more I read, the more I became interested in it. The character setting is interesting, the content is exciting, and the emotional scenes are sweet. The real identities of the two characters in the article are secrets, which is very attractive to me. Finally, I want to ask the author, will there be any updates today [Send a heartfelt message] Therefore, this book is recommended for people who like to read sweet and refreshing stories. The setting in the text is really great. I am really looking forward to the next world. This world is also beautiful. Moreover, the author is a good person. He writes the article seriously and responsibly. If you feel that the previous article is not good, you must not abandon it. The author will write a follow-up to fill in the pitfalls. So I hope everyone will stop giving bad reviews and lead this book to a higher score so that more people can know it. (Dear author, I have commented seriously like this, why don't you consider updating two more chapters [please update] [grievance])

This is the review after reading the first story. It's very good. It can be said to be the most detailed description I have seen in six years. I'm curious what the author is like. Looking back, I still feel a bit unclear.