A Crossover Journey Starting with Fate

Man, the subject matter is very good, but the writing is really messed up. I almost felt dizzy when I read it. I originally saw Sword Art Online, so I clicked on it. Why

Why does it have to be female? What if it's just a single thing? It always feels weird, and I'm not picky anyway, but I still dislike the idea of ​​a boy and a girl. If you can't accept it, don't watch it. Just a reminder here

The writing is very messy, and there are a lot of time-travelers, and the protagonist is either beaten to death or punched through the body. I was speechless when I saw it. If you have strength, you won't magnify it and keep spreading it. It's even more possible later on. After you die, the system will regenerate your body, but you can still continue to wander. It is estimated that not many people can watch it.

Hmm... How should I put it? The plot is very good, but I personally don't like it very much. One reason is that there are multiple time-travelers, and the other reason is why the protagonist always turns into a female. Does the author have any hobbies?

The arrangement is messy, the main character suddenly changes gender, you know how to write a book. Say no more. Those who are destined can meet it and see for themselves. Anyway, it's uncomfortable not to rate it.

The plot is poor, and the combat power system cannot be controlled. Did you only draw Morgan and not reach 2.6? Did you really watch the plot, brother? Don't be kidding, there are some things you can't grasp, lj

It was so explosive that my whole body split open. I have never seen anything so disgusting in my life.

Transgender novels are basically cool. The author doesn't know? Most boys only read novels with male protagonists. The female protagonist is basically a female channel. Girls' novels are basically about romance, not combat. I don't know what the author was thinking. All I can say is that this book is cool.

There are multiple people in three chapters, a fight in five chapters, setting in chapter ten, and a time traveler in chapter twenty. A Holy Grail War, about 20 Servants, nearly ten Masters, and three or four Holy Grails. So much has been written in 60 chapters. [Laughing awkwardly] Such a chaotic world line must be cut! [Punch hard]

This is a bit unbearable, why does it feel similar to the female channel system? This way it seems that the system is the master, and the host is just a wage earner, giving as much as he wants, and not giving if he doesn't want to. To me, a tool is just a tool. Doing too many scenes and not being my wife will only disgust people, so I really don't want it. The most critical thing is that the protagonist always changes gender, and anyone who randomly adjusts the price is a disgusting person. You said you wrote so well in the early stage, why do you have to make such a disgusting setting? The system was not so disgusting in the early stage, so why did it talk so much in the later stage? Did he kill the other two time travellers, so he has nothing to worry about? That's really true. One word is perfect.