After Winning Over My Aloof, Lovesick Big Sister, I Became Her Only Favorite

It's very interesting. The cold lady at the beginning turned into a very possessive yandere. At the beginning, behind a sister, there turned out to be a submissive little coward. Just like this, she encouraged her to chase her, and she accepted everything, giving her the ultimate pampering [blowing kiss]. Beautiful.

OK, OK, pretty good. Except for the yandere in the middle, there really is a sense of yandere suffocation. The emotional line in the early stage is inexplicably fast. It is not very clear from hating to possessing. [Thinking] But I like to watch torture [face covering] I thought there would be torture in the crematorium [Thinking] After all, the yandere's imprisonment is really, overall good. Another thing is, why is Shen so miserable? [Grief] Even the counterattack failed, and the ending felt a little rushed. Well, it didn't really torture me, so it was a bit empty. I felt like something was missing [Shy] Overall, it was good.

A very good book, it would be better if there were more cars [laughing]

The writing is so awesome. I love reading this type of books, but there are very few of them. Please give me more support from the author🥵

As an infinite flow novel, I think it is wonderfully written. I think the scene construction and group portraits are very good. I even think it's good to keep depicting them going through different difficulties in different small worlds. At the beginning, I was blindly attracted by settings such as Double Lily and Yandere. However, I found that the structure and layout of the emotional line were not written smoothly. Although according to Yao's setting, she is a potential yandere, similar to a second personality. However, in the later period, there was no obvious difference between the two personalities. There was a kind of forcible fusion into the same person. Yao has always emphasized on retaining "I", which is the cold self and Ai Yue's self. The initial setting of Yao was aloof, cold and arrogant. To be honest, I was very disappointed with the early setting. Every time red threads or red eyes appear, I will treat her as a second personality, which is a yandere setting. Moreover, the point of her yandere is that Yu Yue cannot leave her. I felt that the characterization technique that was not allowed to leave this part was hard. Especially in the later stages, I felt suffocated. Physically, I strongly feel that this is not Yao. Even if she is a yandere and wants to go crazy, she should be described in a completely red-eyed state. I will understand better. However, most of the time, Yao's strength and morbidity are in a sober state, which really makes Yue sweat again and again. I personally think that the fused personality should be somewhere between aloof and yandere. Her indifference and ruthlessness are too yandere-like, and she is almost indifferent to the world. Even though as the ruler of the world, she needs to be highly rational, she should not ignore the life that exists in front of her. The setting of "Killing Yue" belongs to the yandere, and the cold and arrogant tenderness should be given to Yue. However, in the later stage, I feel that Yao's feelings for Yue are only as hot as burning flames, suffocating to the point of terrible restraint. Yue's love is like a patient suffering from Stockholm Syndrome's ❤️ for the prisoner. The process of Yue's liking until falling in love feels like being forced to load the progress bar. In "Pink Paradise", Yue's love started with her appearance, and finally she fell into lust. Her sinking is actually her recognition of her own feelings. I think it is very reasonable and well laid out. Yao's emotional development and the process of the two souls merging made me feel very abrupt. Yao felt like she suddenly fell in love with Yue. It may be a personal illusion. Everyone has their own ideas. (If you don't like it, please don't criticize me. Children are thin-skinned) This linkage is very interesting. I personally feel that Sister Yan's arrangement is a bit pity. I was originally expecting a battle between Sister Yan and Yao. When Yue leaves or when Yue is imprisoned, I think it can be a part. After the battle, it was discovered that Yue's body had the other half of energy. Yue rescued Yao, and Yao regained her aloof and arrogant character. I might be a little more involved. All the above remarks are personal feelings. If you have any complaints, please don't build a building. In addition, thank you to the author for your great efforts and dedication. See you in the next book👋

It's so beautiful and pretty (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡, but I hope it's not too cruel, I hope it's him [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

The storyline of this article may not be particularly attractive, but it is still a successful work. First, it portrays the image of the character well, and second, the language is vivid, rich, eye-catching, and has a good expression effect. Ahem, there are thousands of interesting novels in the end, and they are all like the wind passing through my ears without fate, but I believe it is a romance in my heart. |||| ((((( ❀ ))))))) ⌒＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿⌒[Laughing][laughing][eating][eating][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]⭐️🌟⭐️⭐️

It looks good, but I think it would be better to be more detailed in some places, such as how Kun Yao's so-called identity is solved, and what Kun Yao did during her several outings, so that the whole plot can be fuller, and then the ending is a bit rushed. The plot is good, I'm looking forward to the author's new book [Sending Hearts]

I really like this book. The author's writing is good. The plot is not draggy. The plot is attractive. I also like the supporting characters. The emotional line between the heroines is also very good. The most important thing is that I like the character of the protagonist very much. This book is very suitable for my appetite and makes me want to read it in one breath. Overall, this book can not only be given five stars, but it is worth it.

Come on, the author, the plot is also good, there is no stupid plot, the supporting characters are also very good, there is nothing that is always jealous and framed, it is very comfortable to watch In terms of weird plots, the author can add some background stories, such as why the ghosts in a small world were born, and the protagonists find the truth of the world while completing tasks, and there can also be some twists and turns. A world does not need to be completed so quickly, otherwise the inspiration may be exhausted later, and you can also write more plots in the small world. We like to watch this [laughing]